The Earth stops spinning/stutters on its axis
Dissolve into pleasure
Lightning
Electricity
Waves (overdone, but you can jazz this one up if you try - i.e. waves of fire instead of the usual)
Explosions
Shockwaves
Rippling
Trails of fire
Fire pooling low in their abdomen
A spring coiling tightly and then being release
Fireworks (please only use this sparingly. It's the oldest term for kissing/pleasure/etc. in history)
Light - white light in particular, or everything cutting to white noise
Vision fading to black
Static
Shattering
Splintering
Pulsing (also feeling someone pulse whilst inside them)
Time slows
Falling
Flying
Rocketing
Going still/tense
Jerking
Vocalisation in any form
Moaning a mixture of curse words and their lover's name
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