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Okay, I don't really have anything to say, but I'll try.
I wrote this story because I wanted to. None of what happens here has actually happened. Honestly, I wrote it as naturally as I could without thinking about what anyone thinks or how the Internet trolls are gonna criticize it, because I was waiting for that moment when my story ceases to be mine and becomes something else entirely...
But I'm not that good a writer, so it hasn't happened yet.
So if you've got any constructive criticism for me, please constructively criticize! But if you hate this story, just let me know once and get the hell away.
Also, please don't plagiarize this. It's ridiculous to think that someone might plagiarize this, but if you're thinking of it right now, I'm asking nicely. DO NOT PLAGIARIZE THIS STORY. WRITE YOUR OWN BOOK. I'M SERIOUS HERE. WRITE YOUR OWN FUCKING BOOK.
Please vote and comment and tell me how I can improve.
Enjoy!
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Red and Gray
Short StoryGray's back. He just spent a year being 'straightened out' - apparently - and now he's back, with his emotions no less conflicted than they were a year before. Only becoming more conflicted when he reunites with his best friend, Red.
