Me: Hey everyone. I got something to say. This is from a reviewer from Fanfiction.
I was checking the reviews on my story when I came across one if you want to read it, go head. It's in the reviews. This Guest, who was too shy to review, left me not only a review of the story but also an advice and an eye-opener. The Guest told me I was repeating too much and that I needed to use more pronouns and that I should stop spoiling the chapters ahead of time. The Guest said that I should rewrite the chapters I had already to fix it, so I did.
Whoever you are, if you are reading this on Wattpad, you did not hurt my feelings. Thank you for letting me know about what I was doing. I did go back and rewrite what I could, but I will keep what you said in mind. Thank you.
Another reviewer from Fanfiction asked this and before any of you do, here's the answer. The dragons aren't Anthro, their Humanoid. They have a human body, but their skin is a different color, they have dragon tails, wings, horns, eta. Do you get it?
Now that's done, go ahead and read.
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No One's POV
Hiccup walked forward between the small opening to the cove. He couldn't believe that he was this close. Hiccup looked into the cove from the opening but saw no Night Fury Hybrid.
Hiccup's plan was to give the Night Fury some fish since he seemed hungry yesterday. He also wanted to talk to the Night Fury, ask him questions, and learn why the Night Fury spared him. Hiccup couldn't deny that he was curious about the Night Fury and wanted to know more.
As Hiccup walked into the cove, he didn't see said Night Fury watching him from on top of a rock. He was justing laying on his back, letting the sun warm his skin after he got done trying to get out. He knew about the opening, but his wings prevented him from getting out. When Hiccup got near the cove, the Night Fury heard him so he was now on his hands and knees watching Hiccup.
The Night Fury was just thinking about the boy. He wanted to know more about the boy as well since he saw the boy yesterday. He had this feeling about the boy. Not only that, the boy's eyes had something about him.
Hiccup looked around as he walked. Hiccup couldn't see the Night Fury watching him because his back was turned to the rock. Hiccup held the pack that was on his right side with his right hand, his left hand near the opening of the pack.
The Night Fury smelled the fish and got hungry. He slowly lifted himself off the rock, his movement catching Hiccup's eyes.
Hiccup turned and gasped, taking a step back as the Night Fury stood up and stepped down the rock. The Night Fury nodded his head forward, telling Hiccup to back up a bit as the Night Fury crouched in front of him. The Night Fury didn't know why Hiccup was there so he wanted to be prepared in case anything happened.
Hiccup gulped and took a deep breath. Yes, he wanted to see the Night Fury, but it was a Night Fury, the most dangerous dragon around.
"Hi there," Hiccup said, his voice quiet as he hunched in on himself a bit, not meeting the eyes of the Night Fury, scared that looking him in the eye would make him angry.
The Night Fury blinked and tilted his head, slowly standing up as he stared at Hiccup. He saw how Hiccup hunched in on himself and how Hiccup seemed to try and not look him in the eye.
"Hmm," the Night Fury said as he walked towards the boy. He saw how Hiccup watched him with his eyes. While keeping an eye on the boy's face, the Night Fury started to circle the boy, taking a closer look at his shape and clothes.
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