Sukor - The beast I have fallen in love with (under editing)

Sukor - stay alert

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Recap; Ajay tried to abduct Chakor. Chakor fight n Suraj fought for too n win. Ajay is now arrested.

Suraj; I won't leave Vivaan how dare he even think that cheap abt u. He wanted to have u to share with Ajay. Suraj anger was huge he was driving madly. Chakor; Suraj. please control over urself u can't let ur anger take the over hand. Suraj; But Chakor he is ur BIL how dare he... Chakor; like u dare to ask Imli. Suraj; thought for a moment Chakor how can u love me. I know I did wrong but trust I never loved her my obsession was with the child not with Imli. Chakor; I know but u did asked her n confessed ur love n that's how Vivaan does it. Suraj; but he made to do with the drugs he gave me. Chakor; knew what the drugs have done to him n her. Suraj we need to be smarter than him. U know how easily he fooled the villages n destroyed their homes. Suraj; ya... the kids. Chakor; smiled I'm sure tgey will understand I will Chagan n inform him that we r not coming. Suraj nod.

Chakor talked to Chagan n explained him that they r now heading to the haveli. Suraj will come in the morning in will play with the kids as promised. Suraj was driving he suddenly stopped. Chakor; Suraj y u stopped all of a sudden. Suraj; whenever we both r on the way it's mostly of work. Chakor; Haan that's true. But y r u saying it? Suraj; I never bought u anything neither I have eat with u. N today I'm very hungry if u don't mind I would like to invite u for a lunch?. Chakor; smiled sure even I'm hungry. Suraj face was brighten of happiness.

Suraj n Chakor jumped off the jeep n went to a near by dhabha (highway resturant). Chakor; it's strange to go with ur wife to the first date on a dhabha. Suraj; date... he was confused. - I never thought abt this -. Chakor if u want we can go somewhere else. Chakor; shook her head there must be a reason y u stopped here. Suraj; nodded yes it's one of the best here n the food is so delicious u will leak ur fingers. Chakor; really I'm dying for food. Suraj; don't worry I won't let u die 😊😊.

Chakor n Suraj eat. Chakor was eating alot n unusual stuff. Suraj notice the change but could be anything. Suraj; Chakor do u want a sweet dish. Chakor made big eyes Haan. They eat kheer n gulab jamun (ind/pak dessert). Suraj was happy the first after a long period both could spend some quality time together without thinking abt the rest of world. Chakor; don't u want to eat?. Suraj smiled n shook his head. He gave his dish to Chakor who didn't took 3 min to eat it. Chakor; mmh Thank u. Suraj nodded he paid the bill n they left.

Vivaan; Ajay is in jail no!!!! how can this be possible I destroyed Chakor n her life Suraj is just a brainless puppy how could they defeat Ajay n his goons. Ragini; Vivaan bhaiya try to understand it's better if we work together. Ranjana; Ragini is saying right listen to her. Vivaan; u r just a woman who gave me birth don't try to become a mother now stay away. Ragini; fine Ranjana maa won't say anything to u. But listen Suraj n Chakor r now a team n both r working together so should we. Vivaan was thinking n said I can't trust any of u. U r all selfish. Ragini; but I have a Trump card u would love to know...

Suraj n Chakor returned. Teju; Suraj Chakor r u alright? Suraj nodded yeah we r but Vivaan will die today. Teju n Chakor were shocked. Both stopped him not to do anything which could lead him to jail. Chakor; Suraj u have to think u can't commit a crime n leave us alone. Suraj; but he tried... Chakor stopped him she put his palm on his mouth. N signs on Teju - no more tension -. Suraj nodded. Chakor; we need to know what he planning next we have to be alert n stay smart. Teju; Suraj listen to her u r my only hope to give them a better life. Chakor; u owe me that. Suraj agrees but I will talk to him. Teju; u can't. Sukor; what y? Teju; he just left. Suraj; Ragini n Ranjana. Teju; they r here. Chakor; that means they already have a plan. Suraj; yeah n it coukd be very dangerous. Chakor; we have to be stay careful.

Ragini n Ranjana were laughing no one can stopp us now. Suraj has dug his own grave n no1 can help or rescuer him. Ranjana; now my son will get his real status the heir of Rajvanshi. Ragini; don't even think abt this. I'm the only heir if Rajvanshi. Ranjana; but... Ragini; cut her off don't forget ur son send him to jail n Suraj tried to kill him now it's only me....

Next part evil returns...