The next morning Taylor woke up with a ginormous grin on her face. Last night she and Coral had so much fun!! They did a sleepover and painted their nails (Coral's fingernails because, well, she had a tail) and ate a whole box of pizza and eighteen cupcakes all by themselves! Taylor didn't even stop to think of Jake, and where he might be she didn't see him all night because she was having so much fun! Having a mermaid was the best so, when Taylor woke up she was smiling, but it wasn't for long. When she went to check her instagram, she saw the photos Jake had posted of Coral!! Taylor screamed for Jake to come here right now but he was no where to be found. And neither was Coral!!!! Taylor had left her in the bathtub because she was so small so she could fit, but when she woke up she wasn't in the tub! Taylor saw a note on the table that said "you didn't let me hold her, well now she's mine! Have fun being alone sis -Jake" Taylor was so upset she started crying. But then she realized that Coral wouldn't have gone wih Jake willingly so she must have left a sign or a trail! Taylor looked all over the house and it took three hours. But finally she saw a small blue scale on the ground. It had to be corals. She looked nearby and there was more of the scales all lined up in a trail Coral had left a trail for her!! all day Taylor was following the trail until she finally followed them all the way to a cave which was near their house and inside she found something that took her breth away. it was...
to be continued
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How did you guys like another cliffhanger?? Haha! I hate cliffhangers but I'm a hippocrit what can I say😂 On the last section I got some feedback to include more punctuation, so I did some studying and threw in some commas and added more exclimation points and question marks for excitement lmao 😆Hope you liked this improved version! I'll try to update soon so you're not kept in suspense 🤤wink wink
