-my fallen angel- Unfinished

SHINING STAR.

ok so this is the first chapter uh my gf helped me so all this is thanks to her so hope you like it! :3

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Mark screamed in pain as one his pitch grey wings was shooted. He started to lose his balance on the fluffy clouds of a place they call, heaven. He fell trough the cumulonimbus clouds. His body went at the speed of light, fire sorrounding him. From a view from earth, He looked like a star.

Seán was looking trough his telescope until he found a fallen star. It was gorgeus. He's never seen a fallen star like this before, a truly breath-taking view.

Seán's pov.

I was looking trough my telescope as i saw a fallen star, it was so diferent from the other ones i have never seen something like this so..so beautiful so gorgeus. My eyes widened as i saw it hiting the ground in the midle of the forest not so far from were i was " what the fock..?" i stood up and runed in the living room searching for my phone, as i found it i runed downstairs and opened the front door and runed to the explotion place.

Mark's pov.

I was flying trough the clouds, so calm so relaxing but it didnt last that much. As i felt a bullet hiting my pitch grey wings, i screamed in pain losing the control i falled on the sky, fire sorrounding me as i got closer and closer to the ground. Why this needed to happen to me? how could someone do this to me..." H-HELP ME!! SOM-.." before i could keep screaming i felt my spine hiting the ground roughly, blood dripin from my shoulder my left wing i couldnt feel it. The only thing i could feel was pain, my eyes filled with tears, my hair was also messy.

I heard footsteps getting closer to were i was. i saw a young male his hair was grass green why did he looked so chocked? were are his wings? that were too many questions and toughs. I trayed to crawl out of the hole i made, collapsing on the ground i trayed to manage for talk " h..h-help m-me...please...'' the young male sat in front of me his eyes were a blue ocean tone so beautiful and adorable. What did he never saw an angel like me?

Seán's pov.

I panted heavy as i made it to the place, my eyes widened as i looked at the scene. it was...an ANGEL?! no this was to be something else, the man was bleeding his hair was a beautiful red rose, one of his wings was bleeding his shoulder too. i backed up as he crawled out of the hole and whimpered in pain, he looked at me and asked for help. " help me " that's what i heard, i sat next to him and looked at his wings so gorgeus, his eyes were a chocolate brown.so cute.

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yeh this was a short chapter SORRY i really hope you liked it, like i said this is my first time writing and my gf helped too so thank you all for reading! ill try to make the next chapter as fast as i can :3 BUH BYE!