The Boy Who Saved Me [ON HOLD]

Hello people!

Hey everybody! Guess who is editing the next chapter?

That is right! MEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!

But while I am doing this, I have something that I was hoping you all could read and give me your opinion on.

It is a short story called "The Life of a Prince" and is BL.

The Life of a Prince

Once upon a time, there lived a beautiful prince. He was loved by all, but had an antipathy for every form of blandishment blessed upon him. The prince's father is bilious, while he is completely antithesis. All of the fair maidens in the kingdom seem bland to him, especially when they baroque him as to impress him. The day of the ball, the prince was sitting at the throne looking over the guests who were banal to him, when he sees a new face in the crowd. This unknown person was badinage with the rest of the people in the crowd around him. On his way over to this man, the prince was stopped and given a bauble by a maiden who thinks that they are "meant to be." The prince gives a gift to a little girl he sees, and walks up to the unknown man. He asked the man for a dance, which he gladly accepts, and begins to beguile him. Suddenly, there is a bedlam in the midst of the crowd around them. Then the maiden from earlier comes out and besmirches the prince's outfit in a fit of bestial rage. The maiden's face went blanch in horror as guards escorted her out of the castle, the prince and the man walking away and into a room filled with multiple suits. The prince and the man stare at each other, besieged with these new-found emotions they feel for each other. The prince walks up to the man, and with much courage, give the man a gentle passion-filled kiss to which the man returns. Who knew there was such thing as love at first sight?

"And that is how your daddy and I fell in love." The beautiful king tells his children, who were adopted from an orphanage a two years ago. The king smiles at his husband who is holding their children in his lap as they all are entranced by the story.

"I love you." His husband says to him, to which the king replies the same.

-The End-

That is all there is to it. It was an assignment in my English class, and this is literally what I wrote as my short story. I am worried about my teacher's reaction to it. PRAY FOR ME EVERYONE!!!!!!!!!