Alpha's True Love

This my first time writing a book so please comment and tell me what you think.

CHAPTER 1

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"SCARLET-ROSE ADAMS GET UP YOU WILL BE LATE FOR YOUR FIRST DAY OF SCHOOL" "I AM UP" I walk to my walk in closet and pick out my outfit for today I choose my dark blue skinny jeans with a purple belly top with black panties and bra. I walk to my bathroom  which has a jacuzzi, bath, shower, full length mirror  and a gold sink. I wait until the water is nice and hot before I strip down and hop in, I take a 20 minute shower and use my strawberry and vanilla shampoo and conditioner I love that smell, I use my strawberry and chocolate body wash. I jump out and put my clothes on I walk out and dry my hair and then curl it my hair is Blonde with a natural born streak and stops an inch  from my a** and then put on natural makeup on that consists of mascara, black eyeliner and a bit of foundation.My brother Jaydon is 18 years old he decided to walk in  and he tells me that he will give me a lift in today he is 6'1 and has a big frame I on the other hand I am 5'3 I have an average body not to fat and not to skinny I am 16 years old. Jaydon is very over protective just like my dad. My mum is a vampire and my dad is a werewolf. My is called the Blood Lovers I know it is not that scary but I think you might be underestimating my pack they are the number 1 fiercest pack known then it is our archenemy the Blood Howlers their Alpha Jason is horrible he will not hesitate to kill you and he has killed some of his own pack and that is cruel.

I walk down stairs to see my mum and dad kissing "EWW stop" they start laughing and they stop "morning sweetie" morning mum,morning dad" after saying morning to them both I give them a kiss on the cheek and went to grab an Apple from the fridge then headed out to Jaydon's Black and Red Lamborghini I have remembered that I forgot my shoes so I go back inside to find my red converse and then slipped them on I walk back out to find my brother already in the car and waiting for I pick up my backpack that I keep in the garage I don't know why I just do."took a long time what held you up?" He asked worry in his eyes " I was just thinking that was all" then he started the car and backed away from the driveway and went to school.

*at school*

It was quite big and the parking lot was huge aswell when we parked I got out and walked to the office to get my schedule for the day and on the way there I got a few stares and wolf whistles but most of them where stares I didn't like it much and when I got to the office this lady looked up from her pile of papers she looked to be around mid twenties "hello what can I do for you?" " my name is Scarlet-Rose Adams. I am new here" " oh yes I have your schedule here somewhere" she pulls it out from a draw on her desk and hands to me with a map and locker combination"thank you"

that is all I say and then walk of, I look down at my schedule and it says

Maths

History

Science

French

Lunch

Communications

Gym

I mentally say Ugggh because I hate Gym it is just horrible I don't like the teachers they shout to much.When I get to my locker I open it and get all the stuff I need for class and shut it when I turned around I saw a girl with chocolate brown hair and forest green eyes she was around my age and looked to be 5'1 she was average wait and wore a cute outfit like mine but she had high waisted shorts with a top that said ' Love Bites So Do I' on it and it was so cool a wave in my face snapped my out of my gaze "Hello my name is Madie and this is Chloe" she held out her for me to shake and I did "hi my name is Scarlet-Rose" " hey can we look at you schedule that is what I say to my new friends" did she say friend "okay here you go" she took it of me and her eyes  went wide "we have the same lessons you can sit next to me and Chloe if you want?" " Yh okay why not" we laughed and when we got there we opened the door and to our seats when the teacher came in we all went quiet and then she started "morning class. we have a new student today and she is here with us" she said looking at me I got up and walked to the front and started "hi my name is Scarlet-Rose I am the Alpha's daughter of the Blood Lovers and I am 16 I have a very protective brother called Jaydon he is 18" I finished and was glad it was over and went to sit down this is going to be a long day.

How did that go? this is my first book so yh please comment and then give me some ideas for the next chapter. thanx :)