Entirely broken

Proposal

Ellie's pov
"What am I going to do?" I said "don't freak out it's not a big deal" Alan replied one of my kinder garden friend . She was a tom boy and loved having short hairs and wee boys clothes she had no sibling,As she is karate black belt every one is scared of her as well as boys. "But , he asked me out .what am I going to say to him?" I said ."leave it to me ,don't worry your friend is still alive" she replied Turning her hands in to a tight fist, "NO no no no don't tell me you won't do that , like you did last time" I said ,a wide grin spread on her face .
I still remember the last time when a boy purposed me she turned his handsome face into purplish blue .i hope he would think 100 times before going to any girl, poor boy I still feel bad for him . "Please Alan don't do that please! I will take care of that " I said " are you sure? Because you hesitate too much in front of boys" she replied having concern for me "this time I won't so don't worry if any thing happens I will tell you" I said . After, the chemistry class me and Alan were on our way to canteen , suddenly we heard the thudding sound of running and soon saw a group of boys who were coming in to our direction.
I was going to step aside but too late for that , they were way too fast I closed my eyes in fear . And a hard body landed on me we both landed on floor as I sneak peak to see who was it, then I saw same pairs of blue eyes 'harry' which were boring into me with concern , I wish this moment would stop forever . My thought were interrupted by my brother 'Zen' . We both stood up and strong arms encircled me and whispered in to my ear "Ellie are u hurt any where.?" Zen said I hugged him back and replied "don't worry I am alright .now go to your friends" harry asked " are you okay" which made me shy and I didn't realised that my face was turning red, without replying him I turned to Alan who was standing behind me ,took her fist and and fasten my pace towards canteen . She shocked my hand at cafeteria and said " Ahhhhhh, it hurts" soon I realised i was holding her fist tightly . " I am sorry didn't knew I was holding that tightly " I replied " what happened to you back there.? I know you like harry and want to avoid him , but you don't have to ignore him like that" I replied " don't tell me what have I done? Ahhhhh I feel embarrassed by my behaviour" she said " it's okay don't worry , now let's have some lunch" . "Ohhh yeah! I forgot about that".
As we were having lunch one of our enemy arosa a rotten , rich girl sat beside Alan along with her two friends and said " who's there a fallen girl !" which I knew was indicated to me "shut up ! And don't ruin our appetite by having your presence here" alan said I feel proud that she is my friend " I am going , i also don't like to sit with nerds!" She said " look who's talking. Ohhhh you are indicating this to your spoons like friend who stick to you every time ,awwww how sad is that" Alan replied ,I giggled. And saw arosa face turned red she immediately without wasting her another second. left our table .
Soon after she left Harry and my brother Zen along with their friends entered cafe. Arosa ran towards Harry and asked him for lunch , he ignored and turned his eyes. They sat next to our table and started gossiping about their football match which was 1 week later . I loved harry and wanted to forget about him as it's hurt when he dates other girls ,and I don't wanted my mission to be ruined by distracting my thoughts towards harry.Alan and I left the table after the ringing to bell towards our next class.
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