Hooked

Pt. 1 (POV Kane)

There we were, 20 boys standing around the beautiful new, and let's just say premature, girl. My best mate and I exchanged looks and scanned our competitors. None of these other boys were a threat. I don't mean to be arrogant, but Aiden and I were the 'smokes' of our middle school,because of our achievements in sports and our looks. I went up to the gal and greeted her:"Hey, I'm Kane. What's your name?" The girl only looked up from her mobile now but didn't seem very fazed by the attention she was getting. She scanned the crowd, but as she set her eyes on me and Aiden her face immediately lit up. "Oh hi, guys! I'm Amber!" She stood up and hugged me, meanwhile pressing her boobs against my chest. Well, I knew that school year would be great. "And what's your name, cutie-pie?" "Oh... I'm Aiden." He blushed a little and Amber embraced him in the same boob-out-hug.

We chatted until the school bell rung and finally said our goodbyes and as Aiden and I made our way to class I said:"She's totally into me.'' ''Well, she was also pretty interested in me.'', he answered seeming kinda offended. ''Yeah but I bet she's more attracted to me.'' Just as I said that Aiden's competitive spirit shone through. ''No way bro" ''Yes way. The one who kisses her first wins. You in?'' He considered it for a moment and finally said'' Fine I'm in. What does the loser have to do?'' I tried coming up with a good punishment and finally answered ''I got it! The loser has to kiss another guy.'' " Omg ew I would never do that. ...Guess that means I'm gonna have to win," he said and went into the classroom.

Okay, I'm trying really hard to make this a good story, because I've wanted to write it for a really long time (about 9 months). So please tell me if you find any grammatical, logical or spelling errors, I'd really appreciate it. After all, English isn't my first language, so you might find some.

Thank you so much. Please enjoy the story.

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