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Once Max was feeling better
I asked him what happened.
He slowly said," When they came and knocked you out I did what we said we would do if this ever happened, I yelled Sam run and thought he was behind me but he wasn't. After I realized that, it was to late you guys were gone. As it became night I kept on walking and suddenly I slipped and bumped my head on a rock, and I guess I fell into the water. That's all I remember."
I hugged Max again and then said that we should all start back home. " No, we can't just go home, they'll find us again." Max exclaimed. He was right. We couldn't go home, so we built one right here. Max choped the wood while Sam and I put the pieces together and built the house. At the end of the day we all were so tired that we just fell asleep right there on the ground.