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"Rogue please wake up you're going to be late for school again and then I would go talk to your principal again and I don't want to do that" my mother yelled.
"Ughhh", I moan, this is my life waking up to the sound of my mother telling me to get my ass up because she does not like my principal. I sloppily get up out my bed and slowly walk over to my drawer throwing a white T-shirt and some jeans and try to do something with my hair which is nothing much but a low taper fade. I then walk over to my bathroom brush my teeth wash my face and try to make my way down the stairs which was harder than it seems.
"Rogue don't forget that you left your keys in the drawer the kitchen",my mother tells me with a smile,"aren't you going to get some breakfast".
"Not if you want me to be late"I reply with a smirk on my face, "and I also had to pick up Monica".
"Okay then honey drive safe and don't forget your father will be home today"
"yay"I say sarcastically. I go in the kitchen and grab my keys out the drawer. I walk out the back door to the garage to my car. My car it's it's Beauty I mean a red and black Camaro convertible with leather seats and 26 inch rims. It doesn't get much better than that.
I turned on my car and begin to drive towards Monica's. The drive was boring. not much to do and my speakers been busted. Some dick decided it was smart to break into my car and decided to steal my Radio.
I pulled up into Monica's house.i honked my horn a good thousand times to get her to come out. Only for her to say "I just got up". Well seems like my mom will be getting another call home today.
Finally after 30min which felt like hours she came out. I forgot to mention that I have a major crush on my bestfriend which is so cliche but hey can u blame me. This girl is gorgeous. Almost angelic, I'm talking like brown hair the kind that seemingly flows in the wind when there is no wind, then her eyes... God her eyes, there this light blue color, and her curves,lord she is curvy, and she is this nice light skinned Carmel color. She is beautiful. And also taken...not by me though.
Her boyfriend is a guy named Jared, a player who cheats on Monica everyday... And he's my bestfriend.
"Took you long enough",I tell her as she gets in.
" Oh shut up", is all she says in return.
We make it to school five minutes after the bell and Monica gets out and I go park my car.
Halfway to class I am stopped by the one and only principal of Malcolm fade high school
"And he strikes again"principal Fernandez saids to me, "what's the exuse this time"
" I was la-"I began
"You know what don't tell me I don't care what I do care about is your detention", he says cutting me off,
"now what shall it be... I know how about you clean up fades forest"
Fades forest is our school local forest that some games, pep rallies, competitions, and parties have taken place and it is dirty in some areas"That's not even close to fair", I protest.
"No what's not fair is how much a pain of the ass you are, and since you aren't in class you can start your cleaning now", he says with a huge grin on his face,which only makes him look like he's constipated, and he turns and leaves.
This place stinks I never liked it here.I always thought some it was weird.
I begin picking up trash and making a small pile in the coner next to a tree. I make decent progress. I pick up about 20 percent of the trash in the area I'm assigned. Then I heard I rustle.
At first I thought it was the wind but then it happened again. I grabbed the nearest branch near me."Um I don't know if this is a prank but I have a weapon!"I yell. I hear footsteps approaching from behind me.
I quickly turn around only to be greeted with a gun.
"Hands up now",he said so I listen."Good now keep them there"
A smart person would not do anything stupid. But as most already call me... I'm not smart.
This guy wanted all my money and possibly my keys , which I want bout to give up.He started to pat me down. Digging in my pockets like he was searching for gold.
Now's my chance, I thought acting purely on instinct. I reached out and tried to grab this guys gun.
Big mistake, the guy caught on to what I was to do pretty quickly and as I reached out to grab his gun he caught my hand, twisting it and then kicking me to the ground."Why! ", he yelled, "your retarded.. This could've gone great till you had to play hero." He cocked back gun.
I started to cry. I didn't want to die at least not today. I raised my hands up as if I could block a bullet.
" Please",I begged
He shot.At that same moment my hands ignited not into flames but into a black lightning aura of energy. This energy exploded from my hands. The woods was swallowed in the energy that came from my hands,debis flew everywhere. The woods I was in was now covered in dust. No bullet ever touched me. I was alive. Not so much the other guy.
What the hell just happened, I thought. Before I could process the event. My body have out and I fainted.
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ROGUE ENERGIES
ActionThe city it's in flames... There is a boy on fire.He should be burning but he seems calm almost like he enjoys it.But that's Impossible right. He turns to me and saids, "be ready rogue there's a war coming... We are going to need you" I ope...