Fairy tail Fanfic: Fake become Real (Nalu Fanfic)

Hi this is my first story! hope you like it!!

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Hi my name is Lucy Heartfilia, I'm studying at Fairy Academy. I have a sister named Michelle Heartfilia. She call me Nee-san, by the way I'm already in the school, my sister is studying in other school in Saber Academy, where my childhood friend studying (A/N: I don't want to say their name! you know, SUPRISE!) 
Now i'm introducing my self
"Okay,sit behind Levy." Sensei said to me, btw I don't know who is Levy. Someone raise a hand and she's a girl "Here Lu-chan!" she shout " Uhm.. okay" why she's calling me Lu-chan I even don't know who she is. Now we're studying then we finished now It's time for Lunch i'm realy hungry  i heard a guy with a raven hair shout at the boy with the salmon/pink hair "Hey Flamebrain! Wake up!" "5 more minutes" "You're at the school not in the house! Idiot!" What did you say?!" now their fighting I just gone out of the room "Lu-chan!" someone shout "Lu-chan! Can I eat with you?" she ask "Of course. Why not." I replied. we're now eating, "By the way,Lu-chan I'm Levy," "I'm Lucy, nice to meet you Levy" "Just call me Levy-chan" " 'Kay!"
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Time passed~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
It finished "Bye Levy-chan!" "Bye Lu-chan!" we wave our hand at each other. "NEE-SAN!!!" " Ah, Michelle!" "Nee-san we need to go home right now!" "Huh? Why?" "Duh! you're childhood friends are coming!" "Really?" "yes!" "Let's go home!"
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Time Passed~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ At Home!
"Hey Michelle! You said their coming! It's 9:00 already! Don't you say you trick me again!" yeah she always tricking me "yeah I trick you Nee-san, you know why? because-" "because you're hungry, am I right??" "Yeah" "Michelle I told you if you're going to trick me don't use THEM!" I shout at her "Sorry!"
"Hey! Why you two fighting?!" It's my dad, "We're not fighting!  By the way she's always tricking me and using my childhood friends!" I shout, "Michelle, you're sister is now angry I told you not to use her friends, right?" My mom said at michelle, "BTW, you two,go to sleep it's already 9:00" "yes mom!" we said! then we go to our room.... hah....... I wonder what will happened tomorrow.... "Good Night"

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How's my Work, Minna-san??