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Chapter Four - Bishop Rock
It wasn't long until we got back to the house seeing that Monica was driving the car so fast that I'm surprised we didn't get pulled over by a police officer or worst crashed into another car.
When we got home mom and dad was still down in the library where we left them twelve hour ago. Where they are still trying to find spells and whatever to help us out with the pass that we have been trying hard to leave behind.
So, I guess you have figured out my family secrete by now. If not, then you really need to pay more attention. To those of you that have figured it out I would just like to say thank you for listening to my story and to those of you that don't know by now need to listen to what I say next.
My family and I are witches with real powers as you already know or should know. As time goes on our powers grow and we also develop new ones. For the witch's pentagram well only, the head of the family wears those. We have this thing that we do when a witch couple gets married their family must have special pentagrams made just for them to wear or the mother and father can have new ones made for them self and hand their old ones down to the oldest. Which you should know that my mom wears one around her neck, and dad wears his on his third finger on the right hand.
I have always known that we were witches all of us did, but I have always thought Monica, Miranda, Jason, and me were just like everyone else. You know, just four kids that went to school, had cool best friends, and has a family that loves them. I just always assumed that the only things we would have to worry about would be school, jobs, and families to go through the same things with. The fact is though we are witches not just kids, so we have more problems in our life then you would in yours.
Anyways I am getting off topic again. Ok, so here I am standing there in the door way of the library which now looks different from the last time I saw it. For example, most of the book was off the shelf and stacked on one other on the table.
With these books all over the place it makes me think back to the time when we were over at Travis' house back when we were friends with the were-panthers and jaguars. We would be at Travis' house and every single time you got ready to walk into his room you would have to walk over clothes, shoes, bags, and whatever else you can think of.
Still standing there in the door I could hear mom and dad in the back part of the library talking so I started to walk closer and closer until I could hear what they were saying a lot better. While trying to be quite enough for them not to notice I'm around.
"Trish, we need to find out who it was that really told them secrete so we don't have to fight. I mean I agree that we need to be prepared for whatever could happen, but I really don't think anyone should have to die over this." Dad stated.
Then it was quite I come out of where I was hiding to see what was going on, but they were gone. I should have stayed where I was hiding though because as soon as I turned around there they stood looking at me. I was so scared out of my mind that I couldn't help but jump back from them.
"Madison, hun what are you doing hiding?" Mom asked with concern. "Is everything ok? Where are your brother and sisters?" Dad asked as if ready for action if something was wrong.
"Everything is ok, they are upstairs. I was just worried about you two. You guys have been down here almost all day. I wanted to know how the research was going." I said to the both.
"Oh Madison, we have been down here all day and still haven't found anything about the were-panther and jaguars but at least we have learned some new spells and stuff we can use." Mom look like there was more that she wanted but didn't. Instead she just changed the topic.

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