NATALIE, TRAINSTOP,RIGHT SIDE OF THE WRONG BED BY: LOCKEDANDLOADED

Composition,grammars,i dunno

Since I'm still a rookie,I dunno,LOCKEDANDLOADED'S way of composing the story is a total perfection!

The way she had written the conversation between bruno and the others...

LOCKEDANDLOADED writes it like she's really BRUNO and the others

I mean...ugh,I can't explain it...literally

It's so fluent,I just ugh,

I really can't explain it T^T

This will be the shortest,sorry

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Waaah! It's the shortest!