Writing segments

The red violin

"You know my mother used to tell me how my grand grandma learned to play the violin all by herself alone on her room she had allot of alone time in her room she didn't agree to get out of her room unless she'll get a divorce, that was one of the few things she had there in that room that and time so she learned to play and she finally got a divorce and by the time she got out of that room she was like a profesional violin player and thats how she found my grandpa he fell in love with her music" claris recounted the story she has heard about a million times before to her dear friend vin "So should i bring you a violin? So you could find a decent man like my grate grandma did"
"You're a mean lady very mean and don't you worry I want be here for long"
"are you sure of that?"
"Yes"
"Well what will you do when you get out?"
"I'll buy me a boat and sail as far as i can from here"
"And do you plan to charm yourself a decent man like my grate grandpa with a boat?"
"I plan no such a thing" declared vin "and also many people find boats to be quiet appealing"
"Indeed but non of them aren't decent people not like my grandpa was"
"Are you suggesting l'm not a decent man?"
"Isn't it an obvious thing?"
"Why do you keep bugging me anyway?"
"Because i want you to find a decent man, vin"
"Well if thats really what you want i'll find me one" vin said and claris squealed from happiness "but i'll be doing it my way with my boat"
"As long as they will be decent"
"They will be dear they will"
"So how are you gonna call your boat?"
"The red violin"
"Why so?"
"Did anyone ever told you you have a-lot of questions"
"Yes and then they accepted me to the job, so why?"
"Because simply calling it violin will just be ripping of your grandma, and also red is your color and i intend getting you on that boat"
"Oh really, and with what money are you gonna pay for that boat?"
"With yours of course you did say they accepted you to that job"
"So you do listen"
"Of course i am ain't nothing i rather do more"
"Well aren't you just a charmer" said claris and kissed her buddy on the chick she just couldn't resist no more she knew the guard won't be satisfied but she didn't care no more "you ain't gonna have any problem getting yourself a decent man with that kind of attitude" she said as the guard approached them she hugged them good bye "A decent person!" vin uselessly yelled at her as she walked away from the table.
 

I didn't have the power to properly use dots and commas, so deal❤️
Also does anyone know the word for using dots and commas in English?