The following is a review by _sdrowkcab_ in her book "Story Reviews" for this story. If any of you would like a review as well, don't hesitate to check out her review book (Story Reviews) or mine (Arenelle's Book Reviews). ^_^
Once again, your short story was beyond amazing. The story might not be too long, but that is what I love about it. The size fits perfectly with the story. Your detail is amazing and the plot behind it all made me amazed.
I truly enjoyed it and would definitely recommend others to read it.
Cover: 1/1
Grammar: 2/2
Plot: 5/5
Originality: 2/2
Extra Credit: 1
Total: 11/10
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