divergent: candor or Dauntless

this is my first book so pleas e give me pointers!! :-)

fours POV~

today is the day, the day I escape Marcus my brutal father.I try to pic the faction that seems the most reasonable, Dauntless. I get up to the stage and choose Dauntless.I feel relieved that I don't have to get beaten every day for something like giving him a rong look.I finish all of my training with ease.when I look back to when I was in abnigation  It felt like it was only a day since I chose Dauntless. 2 years have passed and now I'm waiting at the bottom of the net waiting for the first jumper.

I wait impatiently to see what kind of class I will have this year!!!!!!

the first jumper is a girl with beautiful eyes, wait that it's an understatement.I ask her what her name is, she hesitates and I say "you only get to pick once" she smiles a smile that I want to kiss right then and there.when she says"triss" I can't stop thinking about how beautiful her name is. My buddy zeke invited me to play our favorite game called candor or Dauntless (truth or dare) and I ask who will be there and he says a few names but when he says triss I say she is so hot in my mind but my lips accidentally say what I was thinking.I blush when zeke says that he would get us together!

trisses POV~

     when I jump from the net I don't scream I can't believe I actually did it,I was first!! there was a boy very tall and he was very cute wait he is my instructor he is older than me how could he possibly like me, I'm a girl that is 16 but I barely have any curves.he it's the hottest persons I have ever met ,he has to have a girl friend.he helps me down and we stare each other in the eyes.when I tell him my name he blushes for some reason. I meet a girl named Christina and she told me to call her Chris so I do .she said that we got invited to candor or Dauntless witch is a game I have never heard of.I ask who is going to be there but she just says that it's a surprise, oh good Lord I think.

Fours POV

I just found out that zeke told trisses best friend that I like triss, this will be a long day.zeke runs up to me and yells"my place 8:00 candor or Dauntless, girls included. "who?" I say I wonder who all is coming

Trisses POV

chris puts like 100 layers of cloths that she says are cute on me but I think not I never have and never will be cute.but I hope four thinks I am.I have a tank top on, a crop top and a leather jacket I have skinny jeans that are black on top of leggings,and matching bra and panties.

"is this necessary?" I ask Chris but she just says "wait I'm not done with you and yes it is"

fours POV

I sit in a circle and zeke says there are two people missing I ask who but he says that it's a secret

Triss POV

we are at zekes door when Chris knocks we walk inside and four, will, and zekes mouths drop instantly and I blush and Chris laughs.we sit down in a circle and there is one spot left, by four!! I can't help but sit there.we start and zeke says "it's my house so it's my turn, triss you know the question?" I say " well I'm Dauntless right??!" he says"play seven minutes with four and you have to take off a part of clothing off of him and he has to do the same as you"oh no! I get up and walk into zekes bedroom and four follows at my heels.I turn around to look at him and he starts to take off my shirt so I do the same to him, when he kisses my lips I sware sparks fly I kiss him back but am embarrassed because this is my first kiss.I tell him that and he says"mine too" I can't believe it he likes me and it was his first kiss too. we walk out after about 4 or 5 minutes after the seven minutes are up. he it's talking to me and we both forget to put our shirts on and we both run back to the room and slip them on.oh and did I tell you, he has a six pack!! so when it was my turn I dared him to dare me.he dared me to sit in his lap for the rest of the game so I did!! he dares zeke to kiss the girls on the lips that he would date.zeke goes up to me and turns to Chris bends down turns again and kisses me.he runs out of his house because he knows for likes me and that I like him. four runs after him and its girls are the only ones left.Eric comes and knocks on the door and I answer, he grabs me throws me over his shoulder and runs.he kidnapped me.I wonder what will happen I scream and he just injects something in me that makes me sleepy.

Fours POV

I chase after zeke and we hear the girls screaming and one of them sounds like triss.I run faster than I have ever ran before back to the house.all of the girls are crying except triss but that's because she isn't there.I ask where she it's and they say Eric took her.My face gets red I can feel it, there in a lump in my throat ,I head to Eric's house.

trisses POV

he locks me in a closet and I start to cry.i wonder if anyone will come for me after all I'm just a small girl and plus I'm a stiff.wait I'm a stiff but I chose Dauntless I can kick butt and that it's exactly what I'm going to do!!I kick the door as hard as I can.I manage to make a hole and I look through it to see Eric looking at me with a evil grin he walks up to me and unlocks the closet and grabs my arms.I guess I moved a little too much because he injected me with the same stuff and I fall asleep.I wake up and I am strapped to the bed, my feet tied to the end and my hands tied to the top.I freak out when I see Eric get closer and closer.he gets on top off me and I scream he had scissors and I have no clue what he is going to do.he grabs the edge of my shirt and starts to cut up! oh no no no no.when he finishes cutting my shirt I'm just left in my bra.then he started to cut up one of my pant legs then the other until

I was left in my bra and panties.I was so imberised.I was crying and screaming Eric was still on top of me until her started to rape me.I felt like giving up until four came in.I felt saved, he came up behind Eric and pulled him off of me and started punching him and after like 5 minutes after Eric was unconscious for stopped punching him he used the scissors too cut the rope and he took his shirt off and put it on me it went down too my knees! he carried me to his house so he could change out of his blood stained cloths.after that I wanted to walk but he wouldn't let me because of what all just happened.he took me to my house and helped me change. I felt so weak that I could barely walk he took me back to zekes to tell them what happened and why they saw him shirtless caring me with his shirt on me.they all asked him where Eric was but he didn't say.after that I kissed him because of what he did for me .I felt loved.I guess we are kind of a thing now!!

The next day I was scared because I thought Eric would come back. I knew I could never forget what happened but that is in the past now. today is when Chris, will , zeke, Uriah for, Lynn , Shauna, and I go to a lake near amity fields.We are going to be camping for 2 weeks.