People Change

Intro

Hey guys!!! So here is my new story 'People Change'!
I am not sure how well it will be but if you get ANY ideas I would love it so I can keep this story updating. I'm going to see FK&C tomorrow (December 5th) so I should have ideas, I get ideas from things like this... so if you want let me know! abbeythecraver has helped me get the idea soo... here is the intro

(Eve Pov)

I'm in my room playing with my doll Raylan. I am 7. My parents are I heaven. I know cause that's what they told me before they left. I'm with my uncle and aunt now. I love them but they are not always very nice, they sometimes hit me or don't feed me, I sometimes hate them but I know mommy and daddy would want me to love them.
"Eve! Get down here!" I heard my uncle yell.
I hurry down.
"What the heck is this doing here!! I nearly fell over it!"
"I'm..sorry.. I was just.."
"You never pick your stuff up! I step on it, let me show you that I'm done with this!" So my uncle picked up one of the Barbie dolls I had on the floor and he tossed it into the fire, I watched as it burned. Then he grabbed a wood spoon and slapped me three times on the back.
I ran up the stairs, my back was on fire, why does he do this!! I will never get out!
"God, I know your here, please help me! I want my daddy! I want mommy!" I prayed and then cried my self to sleep.
This happened for weeks. As a 7 year old I'm 89 pounds, some say that's underweight, I'm scared for my life cause I'm constantly being yelled at, I keep my toys picked up, I've watched four of my new toys either be burned or broken, so far my favorite thing is a stuffed wolf that I keep hidden so it does not get taken, it was the last thing my parents gave me. One night I hear the sounds of arguing then 'bang!' Twice then a thump, I was lucky that I was in the ground floor. I poked my head out of my room and saw blood and a hand, I inwardly screamed I grabbed a backpack and grabbed my phone, my wolf and sadly a blade, just in case I have not cut in years but when I was four. I did once. I took my backpack and tossed it out the window, I heard my uncle coming so I hopped out the window and closed it so he would not know I escaped.
It was about 9 at night so it was dark and there was no street light for a mile so it was nearly pitch black but a few dim house lights so I run, as far as I can when my legs are too tired I stop under a bridge, I cover myself with a old blanket I brought and I used my wolf as a pillow and I fall asleep but made sure I was not easy to find in case my uncle tried to find me...
one question..
What happened!

Okay Guys!
What do you think?
Too deep?
Let me know!
-bankrupedwithoutlove

Ps do you like the cover photo?