So here are a few reasons why I stopped writing this story to begin with. First off I suck at writing, and felt myself cringe at reading my own work, so I felt like I needed to stop before I made it worse xD. Second, I am more into art, its a passion, and while I'm not the best at it (as you will see later in this note) I do enjoy it, and wanted to focus on improving it more than I wanted to improve my writing. Third, this story was all romantic, and, um. Well I'm gay now, and don't know how relationships work at the slightest. (thats right ladies, single and ready to mingle. Jk please don't leave) so it felt akward writing this, but then i thought. "The fucks ur problem, u can still write this? and I was like IK but like idk its weird man, why you doing this" and then i just went, Fuck it, write it, and so now we are here. Oh also I cant spell for shit, so that made this harder xD. So yeah, if you still are looking foward to this story, leave me a comment, I wanna know how many of you still want this book to go on. Well, on we go to the character
So, I went back, and noticed this one seemed rather popular, and I was like, yo... what... ok? I'm not sure, I look back and find my writing cringe, but hey, most everything I do is cringe, and then I was like, Yo, been about a year since I updated this and I was like, stop, rewrite the character at least, and I'm gonna do that, so here is a new character I made lol
The first sketch was made by my friend frost, who also does art with me,and the second character sheet is mine, so let me tell you about this new character
So, this is Telfia, and I designed her and all my friends either said, it was edgy, or looked like some shit from Tokyo Ghoul, so I was like, FUCK IT, ITS FROM TOKYO GHOUL, FUCK YALL SHE EDGY AS FUCK SHE BLIND CAN KICK UR ASS! And then I wrote the real character. I will continue writing the story, and the updates wont be as bad and far apart, but I am rather busy with exams lately, so give me time, and know that I'm horrible at writing, so i'm trying xD
Telfia, a ghoul that has been starving for years, something that taught her dicipline and control, but it leaves her rather weak, her normal regeneration power takes much longer than average ghouls, taking from days to weeks depending on how badly the wound is. Telfia is blind, but not from birth or natural means. Telfia had once killed after being a starving young girl, and seeing what she had become was too much to bear, so she tore out her eyes. Her slowed healing process also was given limits, and healing her eyes never fully happened, leaving her blind, which seemed to help her from eating. (For those who don't know, Ghouls are cannibals, so yee). She likes being alone, but she cant help but get attached to people who seem to have baggage dragging them down, and it makes her feel as though she doesn't stand out. While telfia is blind, she uses muscle memory and her acute sense of hearing to create and play music, and she has a rather nice voice, but her dancing and stage fright is beyond her ability to deal with. Being a ghoul means everything taste horrible, besides human flesh and coffee(don't ask me how that works I didn't write Tokyo Ghoul). Being a ghoul, her soul is only half human, and she is very capable of defending herself, because her kagune is a strange one. It starts as one large and powerful tendril, but upon being severed, two more grow back, giving her the nickname " The Blind Hydra" in the ghoul community. While she is somewhat powerful and can hold her own, she is rather fragile compared to other ghouls, due to her being starving most of the time, but starving is considered complete hell for a ghoul, so what she lacks for in defense, she more than makes up for in endurance and attack power, although her attacking movements are rather slow, due to her kagune being more than twice her size. While Telfia is capable of fighting with her powers, she prefers not to due so, because having power at her disposal makes it much easier to forget control, and prefers dodging and reasoning with her opponent. Telfias blindness is not a hinderance in battle, it in fact, makes it easier to fight, because the opponent cant trick her with movements or speed, and using her strengthened senses allows her to "see" in a different way, but outside of battle and away from the thrill of combat, she is rather clumsy and bumps into many things. She also tends to feel guilty for those who have been wronged, feeling a responsibility to inflict justice.
Well, that's kind of all I have written about the character, and while I think its good now, I'm sure it has more flaws than I can count xD. SO yeah, from this point on, I'm rewriting the story, but I'm leaving what I have so far until I have gotten to where I left off, then I'm deleting that monstrosity that was my writings skills, but I really haven't gotten much better, don't expect much.
Laterz!
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