Story 2: Cheering Up Discord

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Note: I'm sorry that I haven't been writing this story lately, so I'm going to do TWO chapters today. I hope this makes up for the delay. Enjoy.

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At Fluttershy's cottage......

Discord was just slumping on the couch, feeling guilty about working with Tirek. Fluttershy saw this.

Fluttershy: (Thoughts) He has been feeling sad all week. I have to find a way to cheer him up.

Suddenly, an idea popped up in her brain. She smirked.

Fluttershy: (Muttering) I-de-a.

Fluttershy: (Goes to Discord) Discord, I know you feel guilty, but-

She was interrupted by Discord.

Discord: No need, Fluttershy. I worked so hard to gain everyone's trust, now it's all broken.

As he says this, a heart popped up with the word TRUST in it. Then, the heart breaks in half, along with the word TRUST.

Fluttershy: It's alright, Discord. Plus I know how to cheer you up.

Discord: (Sighs) Fine. What is it?

Fluttershy: But first, let me ask you a question.

Discord: What?!

Fluttershy: (Grins) Are you ticklish, Discord?

Discord's ears perked up. He WAS ticklish, but he doesn't like to be tickled, so he tried to lie.

Discord: No, I'm not.

Fluttershy didn't buy, so she used her wing to tickle his side lightly.

Discord tries to hold in his laughter, but chuckles came out.

Discord: Fluttershy hehe I told youhuhu I'm nohot tihicklish.

Fluttershy: Then why are you laughing?

She uses her hooves to mercilessly tickle his stomach.

Discord finally bursts out laughing.

Discord: AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA FLUHUHUHUHUHUHUTTEHEHEHEHERSHY STOHOHOHOHOP IHIHIHIHIHIT!

Fluttershy: So you are ticklish.

Discord: AHAHAHAHA STOHOHOHOP IHIHIHIHIT PLEHEHEHEHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHASE!

Fluttershy: Whose a ticklish draconequus? Yes you are, yes you are.

Fluttershy kept this up for 36 minutes.

Discord: PLEHEHEHESE STAHAHAHAHAHAP!

Fluttershy stops.

Discord: (Panting) Are you done yet?

Fluttershy: Are you feeling better?

Discord: No.

Fluttershy: Then no.

Discord groans. Fluttershy breathes in air.

Discord: What are you doing?

Fluttershy then blow a raspberry on Discord's stomach.

Discord: AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHHA NOHHOHOOGOHOHOHOHOHOHO NOHOOHOHOHOHOHOHOT THAHAHAHAHAHAT PLEHEHHEHHEHEHESE STAHAHHAHAHAHAP!

Fluttershy continues to blow raspberries for 3 minutes. Then she stops.

Discord: (Panting) I'm starting to feel better.

Fluttershy: Good. Now gets some rest.

Fluttershy leaves. Discord snoozes.

THE END

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⏰ Last updated: May 18, 2014 ⏰

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