attempt 3

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geetu was back from school:

om: so what is your great plan?

geetu: simple! take her on a date.

om: one thing for sure is that you have been seeing too much TV.

geetu: daddy, you listen to me now. i'm in charge!

om: sorry.

geetu: now date, locati (location): that rose garden.

om: and time.

geetu: nighttime, 8.

om: ok, for once you are helpful.

geetu: i'm always helpful.

om: sorry.

geetu: ok. so get ready.

om: fine geetika mata.

rikara's room:

gauri was on her new phone (the one in which she failed to understand that om got her it) till geetu came.

gauri: arre geetu...

geetu: mama, quickly get ready and go to that rose garden.

gauri: ok...

gauri gets ready:

geetu: you go, i'll stay here

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geetu: you go, i'll stay here.

gauri: sure?

geetu: yes.

gauri: ok....

she goes.

in the garden:

om was wating. gauri came but before she let om see her, she saw om.

gauri's pov:

om?! geetu ki bachi! if om wants to meet me, then that's his bad luck before i am not meeting him. final is that! 

no one's pov:

she quickly goes.

O.M:

rikara's room:

gauri came inside.

geetu: arre mummy......

gauri: if you think i will forgive your papa easily, forget it!

geetu: what??

she goes out of the room.

garden:

geetu goes to om.

om: geetu?

geetu: mummy didn't want to meet you.

om: what?

geetu: so stop wasting your time and help me with soting (sorting) holi cols (colours)

om: ok fine. ek minute, tomorrow is holi?

geetu: yes......

om: thank you geetu, i love you meri pumpkin.

geetu: what? hey bhagwan, this man has lost it.

precap: last attempt.......success ya fail???? 

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