is it love

why me

When we got to the got to the dorm I tried to sleep but Brandon kept making out with his next door girlfriend Brianna. They call themselves "BB goals" I couldn't sleep. Its like she was doing that on purpose so I could fail my test tomorrow. To fall asleep I had to put headphones on with a full volume. The next morning I was looking for my favorite shoes but I couldn't find it so I had to borrow brandons big sneakers to go with my outfit. When I got to lunch I tried to approach that nice boy that I didn't get the name of yesterday but Brianna had to interrupt taking the last space available next to him so I went to go sit with Brandon not wanting to be alone again. Brandon had tons of girls around him but not his spoiled bratty little Brianna. I asked him if he wouldn't mind if I sat next to him. He told me it would be fine if that boy doesn't come sit here with me. As soon as Brandon said that he just had to stand up and approach me so I stood up and moved over his fave suddenly changed to a curious face. When he got to me he asked me if I was dating Brandon. I got nervous and looked back at Brandon and said "no". Brandon looked at me probably wondering why I looked at him, said something and laughed about it. Finnaly I got to ask him his name. He told me call him Jay and then he left. I went to go sit with Brandon again with a complete smile. Brandon asked if we were talking about him. "Something like that" I whispered underneath my breath. "What did you say" Brandon asked I just said nothing and started laughing out of no were starring at Jay. My laughing quickly stopped when I saw my favorite shoes in Brianna's feet. I walked Up to her with a smirk pushed her to the floor and grabbed them from her beautiful feet. I hated the fact that everything about her is so perfect. The last

The last class Jay came up to me and asked me why did I just grab her shoes. I froze in fear and told him because they were mine. "Demanding. I like that" Jay said. He asked me if i wanted to cut class with him tomorrow. I said......

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