Brooklyn p.o.v
So me & the twins are on our way to Jacques house I decided to take NyLynn some clothes I had to pull over cause 911 was out a lot of polices cars & stuff I thought they was going to pull me over but they didn't thank God
End of p.o.v
*phone rings*
Brooklyn: hello
KateLynn: me & Nyah,Evan & the kids are going to come over
Brooklyn: I'm taking NyLynn clo *gco * *screams*
KateLynn: What's wrong
Brooklyn: there's polices & stuff in front of Jacques house I don't know what happened I gotta go just meet me at the hospital tho cause I'm Sure we are going to end up there
KateLynn:okay I hope everything is okay bye
Brooklyn hangs up & park car & lock the door cause the twins are in there
Brooklyn: where is my daughter
Jacques: she on her way to the hospital
Brooklyn: *slap him*yo ass can't do nothing right
police: we found this note
Brooklyn:*get note & read it*
Dear Jacques aka dad I don't wanna live with you you whoop me for nothing I didn't even do nothing she beat me when you was at work she said if I tell anyone she will kill me I know your not ready to be a farther I just wanna go home to my mom I don't like you No more cause you whoop me &.you let your girlfriend control your life so by Jacques
Brooklyn: you fucking bitch *start hitting Jacques *I fucking hate you you fucking whoop my daughter cause that bitch told you a lie & she abused my baby
Jacques:I didn't know
Brooklyn: this is all your fault you walked back in my life & I let you *see Ashanti & run up on her & punches her *
Ashanti: get the fuck off me
Brooklyn: *pull Ashanti by her hair & punch her & kick her in the face*you dumb bitch
police: *get Brooklyn off of Ashanti *
Brooklyn: bitch I'm not done with you *get in car & go to the hospital *
at the hospital
Brooklyn: *shaking & crying *
KateLynn:it's going to be okay when we see Ashanti & Jacques we kicking there ass
Brooklyn: *shaking & crying* I should have stopped her from going to his house
Nyah: it's not your fault
Evan:I'm gone kick Jacques ass when I see him
doctor: family of NyLynn Rodriguez
Brooklyn: that's us *standing up*
doctor: well she's in a comma but there's a 50% chance she will make it & a 50% chance that she won't make it
Brooklyn: *cry harder*ca-can I se-see her
doctor: Yes this way *lead her to NyLynn *
Brooklyn: *walk to the bed & cry*NyLynn baby I'm sorry I know you might not can here me but I just wanna say I'm sorry & Jacques & his girlfriend is never coming near you you know you was the best thing that happened to me I love you with all my heart & I just want you to know that I know you didn't mean all that stuff you said *kisses her forehead *I love you baby girl
Brooklyn go back out in the waiting room with her friends & cry
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this chapter made me cry
is NyLynn going to make it?
tell me what you think