So I've noticed I keep on switching from one of the character's point of view to third point of view. Does it bother you guys? Should I like keep it at one point of view and announce what view it is when I change views?
Please comment on your thoughts, your feedback will help improve my writing style.For now enjoy chapter Nineteen!~
Word Count: 2726 (Long Chapter Ahead 😁)
Three months, it's been three months since I've reunited with my lost brother, three months since I embraced my fate, three months since I came to a conclusion my heart will never stop racing for my Mate. And now it's one more month to go, until Abby comes back and will be hit by all the events that had taken place while she was traveling around the world with her boyfriend, one month, until my baby is born, until I become a loving mother and wife."He's in the restroom..." Meanwhile, Mark's clan, Crimson Crescent, were all on a mission to bring down the leaders of the Human Hunters. I was in a black van, with a bunch of electronics, amor, and computers surrounding me, along with two other Vampires from Mark's clan, Hayoung and Josh. Hayoung was guiding the rookie squad with around 100, Josh was guiding the more experienced squad with the amount of 300, and I was guiding Got7 and Michael.
"Is there cameras inside?" Bam's question made me lash at him. "Bammie! I'm no pervert! The hell!! I don't want to see an old man's ass!" Yugyeom and Youngjae laughed. "Just check it." I sighed at Jinyoung's command, he really reminded me of my own mother. I slid my chair to the next computer that was in a second filled with computer codes, my hands typing on the keyboard like I had an essay that was due in 3 minutes.
When camera footage was suddenly seen on the screen, I groaned. Why the hell would they put cameras in the bathroom....But then I remembered it was Michio's company after all, he had everything guarded. But the blood left my face when I saw what the footage was revealing. Akihiko, the oldest Human Hunter, was staring right back at me, more like the camera, but it looked like he knew I could see him. "M-mark..." My voice was barely audible, so I said his name stronger this time. "Mark!"
"H-he...He knows.." It might have not made sense, but Mark knew what she had meant, and he could still feel the fear that she was feeling even if they were far from one another. "Shit." Mark pulled out his pistol, aiming it at the door, ready to pull the trigger if something moved. "Mark...RUN!!! There are men on the left hall, about fifty, Run!!" Even though Amanda wasn't in the situation, her heart sped, fearing for her Mate and friends. There was no way 8 supernaturals could take down 50 armed humans. "They have silver!!"
The adrenaline that pumped within the girl was making her just want to open these van doors and rip heads off with her own bare hands, but it would ruin the whole plan. "Turn a Right! There is a office...Michio's office!" Amanda toke deep breaths to calm the nerves, her hands fisted.
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Gun To My Heart |m.t.|
FanficAmanda Liu, a fearless girl that strides the night. Parents killed, her brother gone missing, forgotten the feeling of love. Amanda's only cure from her frustrations and hurt is fighting, until blood is flowing like a waterfall. She loves the nights...