Another Game

Hey guys this is my first fanfiction and I would love some constructive critism. These chapters are super short but hopefully they will get longer as this fic goes on. Enjoy mofos! 

Chapter One

The light from the desktop illuminated Michaels face, revealing his dark circles and pale skin. He cracked his fingers and pulled the keyboard closer. A heavy sigh escaped his mouth. Another night of online gaming awaited him.

 His fingers tapped furiously on the keyboard trying to win yet another round of FIFA. He was growing tired and frustrated. He gave a quick glance across the screen to the little clock, he gasped, it was already six forty seven in the morning. He swore that it was only twelve pm an hour ago.

He stepped away from the computer and headed toward his little bathroom. He rid himself of his clothes and stepped into the shower, He cleaned his body then washed his hair, Michael looked down at his feet and could see some off the blue from his hair washing over himself. He grabbed a towel from the floor of his bathroom and wrapped it around his torso. His eyes searched frantically around the small room trying to locate his uniform, his eyes landed on the moss green shirt and grey pants. He slipped his uniform on and sprayed some deodorant.  

“Fresh” Michael laughed to himself.

He gave himself a look in the mirror; he didn’t look half bad considering he hasn’t slept in two days. He proceeded by walking into the kitchen and gave his mother a quick hello and sat down to some breakfast.