Doki Doki Literature Club

Another day, another run of the game.

I wake up, my head hurt and I was aching, but I had no idea why. I felt like I forgot something, but I didn't know what...but I just brushed it off, and then continued thinking about my day. I was going to show my poem to Natsuki, Monika, and Yuri! I wanted my poem to be more cute, but not super short, I expected at least one of the girls would like it...

I packed my stuff, got ready, and went outside. It really felt like something was missing, maybe I forgot something in the house or whatever, I kept walking but while I was walking to the school, I felt a chill...like someone was supposed to be there...but they weren't. It really creeped me out, so I walked faster to the school.

After the day was over, and I walked to the club room all the girls were waiting for me. "Finally you come! slowpoke!" Natsuki said when I sat in a seat, "I'm glad you didn't break your promise..." Yuri said to me, smiling, she suddenly realized her expression and looked down, blushing "Ah! Sorry!".

Monika smiled brightly at me, "Glad to have you here, I knew you wouldn't have broken your promise, ehehe..." Monika giggled, I chuckled.

"So! Are we ready to show off our poems?" Monika announced, "Er!" Natsuki and Yuri became startled. "Don't worry, none of our poems are going to be perfect! And we can build off of the feedback!" Monika smiled brightly.

Yuri nodded, Natsuki rolled her eyes. The first person I showed my poem to was Natsuki, I was thinking she would call it crap and just throw it on the ground, but I actually think she liked it. "Eh?! Is this really your first poem?! I mean..its not like its good or anything, baka! I just think that its good enough to even be shown in this club, but for such a noobie like you, it's pretty good!"  Natsuki turned away and shoved my poem back to me, "So, it's good...?" I asked her, I couldn't really tell. "Pft! Good enough at least!!" she said, rolling her eyes.

She shooed me away, and I walked to Yuri, and carefully gave her my poem. "Hm..." she read it carefully, "Er.....well this is...um..okay...I guess....it reminds me of Natsuki's poems...", she nodded when she read more, "Just a bit longer...". I nodded, "So, it's bad isn't it?". Yuri looked surprised, "N-NO! IM SORRY! MY FEEDBACK WASNT VERY DESCRIPTIVE! ITS GOOD AND ALL..but...there could be some fixes...you should make your point more outward, rather than just hiding it in and making it just...well...ya know..hidden. Here, read mine, it could help you out a lot." I read Yuri poem, it was amazing, she was obviously a pro at writing, as much I am a pro at video games.

Yuri smiled, she knew I liked her poem, and happily gave me my poem back, and I handed her, her poem. I finally walked to Monika and handed her my poem. "This is amazing!" I smiled when she said that. "Thanks, Monika!" I said, she nodded and giggled, "No problem! But for feedback, just put your pen down, and then move it freely, that always helps me!"

I nodded, I put my poem back into my bag. "Well, see you all tomorrow!" Monika said, sending us all off. I was the first to leave and say goodbye to everyone, and then I thought about taking Yuri advice...but it felt like Natsuki was pretty proud. Either way, I think the two have opposite ideas, and I wished there was a way to impress them both at the same time, but either way Monika was impressed by anything I wrote. So I would have to think about how and who I would want to impress, Natsuki, Yuri, or Monika? Or was there a way to impress all these wonderful girls...I hoped so. And when I got home, I instantly went to writing my poem.