Devil for a husband

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"You can't force me to marry you! " I said firmly, making sure there is no trace of fear in my voice but it was pretty much hard to read this guy's expression. He was as thick as ice itself and cold blooded looking. " I know I can. I always get what I want and I never lose. You're going to stand right by my side and smile for the world and there's nothing you can do about it." "I don't take orders from people! " I spat out to him annoyinly from where I stood. I could feel my hand fold into a fist. This guy was really getting to me. He stood up from his seat and walked up to me with still not a trace of humanity. He finally stood in front of me, his face as stiff as a rod and his eyes as cold as ice. it was hard to penetrate."Then I'll make you learn." he said in an irritatingly calm manner. His eyes told me that he meant what he just said and that kind of sent shivers down my spine. This man was determined to ruin my life and I was a bit scared of that fact. Warning: yet to edit.

Review

I mean he was REALLY determined. I was really reluctant at first in reading this book because the first two chapters were in the author's POV but she explained herself and I decided on giving it a try. Well I'm glad I did. Cause it made me happy, sad ,disappointed, it made me cry and everything in one. Even though it was an arranged marriage it was different and its a good different. Caden is so determined that she should get an award for the most grittiest person in the world. Blayze is so STUBORN to the point where I gave up on him by the first 10 chapters.

The author is Mercy198 and she's such a sweet girl. She's Nigerian but her English is so on point that the story has such good grammar to the point where a college professor would be impressed. She inspires young black woman that no matter where your from you can write just as great  as everyone else. This book is a MUST READ! PLEASE! You'll LOVE IT! And to you Mercy I give you five stars (*****) for such an amazing novel.

WELL DONE!!!!

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