Something, Inside

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Ashton Miller was the richest, most powerful and sexiest man alive. Being a multimillionaire, he had everything he could have ever wanted; girls, cars, and so much money he didn't know what to do with. As the biggest playboy in New York, Ashton jumps from girl to girl breaking their hearts as he went along. He didn't care about anything other than his company and himself. Layla Kingston. Layla was NOT rich, actually Layla was basically broke. She worked as a waitress. She didn't have guys all over her, in fact she's only had one boyfriend and that didn't turn out well. Layla didn't have it all, in fact she's had a very hard life, and just when she thinks her life is finally starting to turn over it turns out way different than she thought. A story about two wounded polar opposites crossing paths. ****************************************************************************************************** Warning! There is some swearing and 1-2 dirty scenes so if you don't like that or are too young I'm not responsible :) Thank you @babedirectionerxx for helping me edit!! Highest Rank: # 1


Review

I strongly believe that Ashton's more bipolar than Layla. But what the heck.  You know, one thing I like about a girl is when she thinks for herself and that basically means that she's Independent and she's smart. And that was caught my attention with Layla she wasn't the most successful in life BUT she stands her ground and I like that. Ashton, on the other hand, is so angry at himself but  I find it adorable. I know you're wondering why but you see when we are angry at ourselves we get so frustrated to the point where we realize and pick ourselves up and we stand our ground. The lovely story begins with them meeting in a club and since then there fates destined for them to be together.


The name of the creative and successful author is OutOfMyLimit17. And she is now a published author in the real world, not only on wattpad. This love story has granted her the success of making it a hard copy and it is now a book series and I must congratulate her with five stars (*****) on critiquing billionaire books.  I which I could give you a big trophy for your amazing work. Well Done!!!

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