ok i'll just edit every part in this book and make it (remotely) better
cuz like
we recently rEACHED 25K READS AND I CAN'T BREATHE ANYMORE BLARERGAHQJQOEIDJXNNSWKEOIEHGG THANK YOU SO FRIKIN MUCH BLLUHHH
• chapter titles will be better (names and shit)
• chapter grammar and spelling will be checked and it will be corrected by grammarly (bae <3)
• will either remove or add some parts because it's a) irrelevant to the plot/messes up the plot or b) it's a mess and i'll just replace it
• will tweak some of the scenes to put emphasis on (like chapter 12)
• **will change the writing style (maybe but that'll make it heavy editing and i don't think i have time for that. i'll try.) (i.e the reader will no longer have a point of view and thoughts and actions will be narrated instead. same as sans.
see "What's Up, Doc" for example)
i think i'll post the newly edited chapter right after i'm able to finish editing so after this part is posted the first new chapter won't be up yet
but it'll be up soon :D
ok byeeeee
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Fanfiction--Long ago, two races ruled over Earth-- --HUMANS and MONSTERS-- --One day, war broke out between the two races-- --After a long battle, the Humans were victorious-- --They sealed the monsters underground with a magic spell-- --Many years later...
