Hey.
Your book's idea was reeeeally good.
My rating: 8.5/10
There were a few grammatical mistakes but if you read it through again you will be able to correct it.
I love how Michael has that small crush on her.
I loved how they met.
I love how Michael teases her.
In short I love it.
My favourite chapter: it would probably be the very last one. It was really nice how he convinced her to go out with him.
Beautiful.
The cover is nice. And Michael looks adorable in it!
The idea was really good!
I am looking forward to this story so please update soon!
