LOUIS'S POV
"Harry I cant believe you just did that." I say
"Well I did so man up, she likes you she will say yes."
"Yeah whatever what if she says no though?"
"She won't she's in love with you. No girl would say no."
"Ok Harry but I'm going to sleep." I pull the covers to my chin and snuggle down into the.
"Good night Boobear." He says laughing. I roll over and smile. I can't keep myself from think about her. Her deep brown eyes alight with interest in almost everything. When we saw a ladybug today she crouched down and watched it until it flew away. Her smile she didn't just use her mouth her whole face lit up when she smile Her teeth slightly crooked. 'Buzz' I hear my phone vibrate. I reach over and pick it up off the table. Its from Jacqueline.
Jac: Hey Lou I wanted to tell you that my answer is yes.
Me: Oh really! Thats amazing.
Jac: I'm glad ur glad. But when are we going to leave.
Im giddy from our conversation and want to burst out laughing.
Me: we leave tomorrow
Jac: tomorrow ok. I'm really happy I met you especially that you saved me from ya know...
Me: from being sexually harassed by some loser? Yeah your welcome.
Jac: thanks Louis I'm so glad though
Me: I am too. Just wondering what's your favorite color?
Jac: well that's random but ummm... THE RAINBOW :D
Me: wow I didn't know that was a color! My favorite is red.
Jac: nice I got some smexy red pants at here.
Me: awesome we can be pants buddies!
Jac: um...
Me: that did Sound weird didn't it.
Jac: yep, what's ur favorite sport.
Me: football what about you.
(Football=soccer)
Jac: Football! Are you kidding I hate that. I suck. I like volleyball.
Me: well I'll have to fix that then.
Jac: oh really are you going to teach me how to play the piano too?
Me: if you would like that sure I'd love too.
Jac: Lol that would be great!
Me: want to come over to hang with the boys and I before we all leave
Jac: that would be great but I need some sleep goodnight Louis
Me: more like good morning have a nice sleep.
I went to sleep think about her and I couldn't stop myself I wanted her to be mine and only mine.
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"Louis get your lazy butt out of bed Jacquelines here!" Harry is jumping on the bed half naked in only his boxers, and Jacqueline is standing in the door way laughing holding her bag to her side. She looks beautiful laughing her eyes light up and her laugh is loud and perfect. Shes perfect.
"Oh hello there Jacqueline." I say jumping up from the bed. I push Harry and he hits the floor.
"Ow?" I stick my tonuge out at him. I notice Jac isn't looking at us and shes covering her eyes. I realize I'm naked.
"Wait give me a sec." I say and run to my dresser pulling on some underwear and then I see she is warring her red pants so I put mine on too.
"Are you decent yet." She asks.
"For the most part I have pants on!" She pulls her hand away from her eyes and Harry burst out laughing.
"Well that was." He hesitates before continuing. "Interesting. Welcome to the fammily Jac you better get used to it."
"Dear lord Harry don't creep her out."
She smiles and walks farther into the room. "Don't worry I have two older brothers and one little sister I'm not easily shocked." She sits on the bed and lays back.
"See Lou no big deal she loved it."
"Harry! What goes through your head?" She say punching him in the shoulder.
"A lot of things!" I say. "Lets get food."
"Ok sure." She says softly.
JACQUELINE'S POV
My first day with them and I see Louis the guy I'm love with naked. This is going to be a long tour. I look out the window and see that its going to rain sometime today. I feel eyes watching me and turn around. I see Harry looking at me our eyes meet and we smile. His hair is falling in his eyes making him look much younger than he is.
"Guys when are we leaving today?"
"In about an hour." Louis says.
"Ok well I'm going to take a walk before we leave." I say.
"Do you mind if I come along." Harry asks which surprises me.I nod my head and slip into my sandals and walk towards the door Harry following me slippping into his slides. I walk out the door Harry behind me. We walk for awhile next to eachother not touching. I turn my head and smile at him. He looks at me and our eyes meet. He holds my gaze as I feel the first drops of rain begin to fall.
He steps closer to me closing the gap between us. He continues to hood my gaze as he brushes the hair out of my face. He lifts my chin and leeans closer pressing his lips gently to mine. I put my arms around his strong shoulders. He slides his hands down my body stopping them at the small ofmy back. He presses me closer to him we're chest to chest. The rain is falling harder. It pouring. His tongue pressing against mine mine against his. We are soaked to the bone. He continues to kiss me pressing his hand against my back harder. Harder. Its perfect except he isn't Louis. I put my hands on his chest and push him away from me slowly. He pulls away smiling, although he keeps me pressed to him.
I look him in the eyes. "Harry you gave me tongue." I whisper.
"And you gave it back." As soon he says it I know its true.
"Harry why'd you kiss me if Louis loves me?" I ask.
"Aren't I allowed to have feelings to Jacqueline?" He looks me in the eyes and lets me go. He walks off into the rain disappearing from view.
"Harry!" I scream. "Wait." I say softly. Tears start streaming down my face. Or maybe its just the rain.
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FanfictionWhen Jacqueline Thomas an average 19 year old meets Louis Tomlinson, they have an instant connnection but when they both are too nervous to admit it will it ever get beyond just friends? Will their realationship survive insane fans, lots of drama, a...