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Ready, Set, Love

Prelude (His)tory - I thought this was a good chapter, at first, I was confused and it didn't make sense but as it went on, it made more sense. The ending made the most sense, and it was the best, most detailed, and anticipating part. I think the first part of the chapter could've been more drawing in but the ending made up for it. Very sad ending to this chapter, but a good way to draw someone in. - Rating: 4/5

I: Fate v. Katya - I liked the opening lines on both parts. I think, what could've been done better in this chapter is detail because I was getting lost in the story. I think thinks could've made more sense, but it didn't, at least not for me, until the end. - Rating: 3/5

II: Double Trouble - I really liked the kind of words you used to describe the things going on. I think the first line could've been more intriguing, or at least the paragraph, to draw your readers in more. I liked the plot of this chapter too, and detail. - Rating: 3.5/5

III: Big Girl - I really liked the details in the chapter. I feel like it could've been a little more intriguing, but other than that, it was pretty good. I like how you look into the characters too. - Rating: 3.5/5

IV: Deal Or No Deal - This was pretty good, details were nice. I feel like it was a little long, but still very good. - Rating: 3/5

Overall: I thought it was pretty good, though I found myself skimming the chapters a little. I think you could've had more intriguing things come in, or things that would've caught the reader's attention a little more. I liked the flow of the chapter, not choppy or all over the place. - Rating: 6.5/10

Covers and Graphics: I thought the graphics you used were very pretty. I liked the picture that divided the parts of the chapters, all of those pretty designs. I thought the cover was pretty good, but I think the word 'Love' clashes a little with the picture, other than that, very well done on the graphics.

About The Book: The summary matched the story pretty well, from what I've read. It's a good lengthy and descriptive one. The genre matches well and so do the tags.

What You Can Work On: Things that will catch the reader's attention. I think a little more action could be happening. Something more intriguing maybe?

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