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Distant Stars

*AUTHORS NOTES* - I really liked this intro. The introduction to the story was very good and it helps us understand what will be ahead of us. I liked how you welcomed everyone to your story. - Rating: 4/5

~SO MAYBE I'M NOT OKAY~ - I thought this was pretty good, I was interested in what this Anthropophobia. It was relatable to me as I am quite shy and super introverted, even though I don't fear people, sometimes, I can't be around them too long, so I liked how that was relatable. I think you could maybe have had a little more action, not just background and history, but also maybe a 'trip to the past' excerpt in the book. - Rating: 3.5/5 

~UH OH THIS LOOKED BAD~ - I was really intrigued by this chapter. The action was definitely amped up quite a bit. The ending on both character's parts made me very curious to see what happens next, and that's how you know you've found a good story. I think there were a few grammatical and spelling errors, but that's an easy fix. - Rating: 4/5

~PLEASE NO TOUCHY~ - The chapter was a really good one. I liked the interaction between the two and how you managed to keep both POVs consistent, explaining enough for both sides. I think that how you continued off from Leo walking through the hall and into the medical room then Melody waking up was a good way to continue. - Rating: 3.5/5

~HEY MYSTERY GIRL~ - This is a great chapter. I think a little more insight could've been given and more action could happen but I loved how we were able to see more into what Melody thought. It was a great chapter and a great way to end the chapter reviews. - Rating: 3/5

Overall: I think it is a great book all together, it is one of the ones that I actually truly anticipated to read and wanted to finish quickly because of its quality. I loved the story and the way I was able to relate and I know how many people can relate to this as well. I liked how you were able to bring up something that really does happen and put it out there. - Rating: 8/10

Covers and Graphics: I really liked the chapter titles and POV graphics too. I think the cover is a little crowded and it is hard to see the title. I think the cover could've been done better, but it still resembles what the story is about. 

About The Book: I really liked how you were able to explain everything in your about the book sections. I liked the reviews as well, something I may use in the future. The tags fitted right in and so did the summary. 

What You Can Work On: When you make a POV switch, make it a bigger switch because I got confused multiple times (or it could just be me and my slow brain XD) I think a tad more action could've been added to the chapters I read, as well as detail. It'll make a lengthier chapter.

I just wanted to say, I will be continuing to read this story!

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