May I also just say some things about the story have been tweaked to fit with my story.
"Asswipe." I grumbled.
Daryl was moaning at me again. Seriously, this guy never gave up, did he?
"Why did you LEAVE him?"
"Because he was being a dick, like you. Guess it runs in the family." I answered.
He walked up to me. "Say that again." He threatened.
"Daryl..."
"No Rick, Let me handle this."
"DARYL! GIVE IT A FUCKING REST! IT'S BEEN WEEKS! LAY OFF ME, MAN!" I screamed at him, before going off. He was my sworn enemy. Bitch ass.
"Now, Mae, I really don't think that's necessary." Said Hershel.
"Hershel, please. I-"
"Mae dear.... don't. I know."
"What?"
But he'd already gone.
Yeah I know it's crappy, but I hope it gets better! x