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Hi

ur request is not unheard 😊

So if u take a look on my Pic for the story U might guess which situation I am portraying.....

I choose this part as I felt the pain but com'on yaar Prem ke paas zabaan nahi hai???? Nahi yahan pe bhi Monologue hai 😊.
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It starts from where Prem leaves his house after the fight with his mother who wants him to take the place Vivek n Preeti to be Sadhana Bhabhi...

Prem; Maa if u want me to take Vivek Bhaiyas place n Preeti should take Sadhana Bhabhis place then I won't marry...

Mamta; But Prem what is with Preeti??? U can't do that to her...

Prem left without a word....

Monologue

Prem.... what I'm doing? I'm breaking the heart of the woman I love for what? My anger on my mother? my anger on the other's who throws oil in the fire to increase the damage... I hate those people they have started the game n now we r paying for there deeds. Not alone but together we r all suffering from different pains...

...I'm going to do the biggest sin in my life I'm going to break the heart of her...

.... Preeti I know u love me long time ago even I fall for U. We both r meant to be together but destiny is playing a game I can't let my family break apart to start a new family with my love... will she understand? She always did... she waited for me all those years she never forget me She kept me as a secret in her heart...

...how can I forgot my brother who has saved me n Vinood risking his life? He has pulled us up from the cliff he was just 2 years elder than me n lifts us both up on which cost he almost lost his arm... Now my mother is keeping him away from us bcz he is not her blood... how can she say this? He is the one y her son's r alive today...

...Now I'm on my way to her place please give me the strength to face her once. I can't just tell her father n leave I need to see her. I need to talk to her. I need to ask for forgiveness...

...Preeti might not know how much I love I never could express my feelings I took for granted as I know u would be waiting for me but what now? Even being urs I can't be with u...

Preeti is monologue

... he is here I can feel him! I know what u r going through n I know y u come..

... Prem I'm not angry no intact I too won't start a new life knowing abt the injustice with Sadhana n Vivek...

... I have waited for the day to become urs long ago even if I won't marry u I will be waiting for u...

... Prem my love for u is unconditional there is nothing stopping me to love u...

... do u know now I love u even more...

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scene when Prem meets Pritam uncle

Prem monologue

...They were well aware of it n were expecting it. They r not angry on me? I asked where Preeti is n uncle told me she is waiting for me..

... she is waiting as always...

...I enter the house n went to the dining room I heard some noises from the kitchen she must be preparing the dinner...

... I saw her as always she looks beautiful she was busy in her work so I turned I thought to leave I couldn't face her n break her heart even if she was expecting it...

Preeti monologue

... Prem won't u call me? Not once...

... hmm ok then I will take initiative...

Scene shift when Preeti stops Prem.

Preeti; Rokho ge nahi? {won't u stay}.
Prem stops n Preeti walks to him. She put her hand in his hands..

Only Prem Monologue/ Preeti will talk.

... She stopped me. How can she accept my decision so easily what should I do now?...

Preeti took him n made him sit on the table

... I feel so weak I'm scared to face her I'm scared to talk to her I'm scared to see her breaking heart. But she behaves so brave...

... y she made me sit? I look up the first thing I saw was our Engagement picture! It was the most happiest day in my life I finally was becoming one with her even if it was just a small step toward her...

... a woman biggest desire is to become a bride if the man of her dreams but I'm shattering her dreams being selfish....

Preeti comes with the tray which was full of food. She places the food in front of him.

... were she really expecting me? She made my fav halwa I still remember the day when we were in Rampur n she made the halwa for the first time just for me. Being a shy guy I couldn't express my feeling in that moment but later in the bus I told her that it was great n I would love to eat again...

... but I never thought it would be like this...

Prem was near his tears he couldn't looked at her she saw him n felt his pain... He didn't touched the food. Preeti walks to him n hold his shoulders...

(That is my fav 😍)

Preeti kindly places her hands around his neck
Prem Hum Chahe Bandhan Main Bandhe Na Bandhe....Jazbaat Ka Rishta Toh Dil Se Hai.
{whether we're tied in a bond or not... the relationship of emotions is with the heart}

(http://www.filmyquotes.com/movies/341)

Hearing her words Prem turns to hug her back in tears...

... I'm so glad to have her she knows what I need to hear she knows what I feel she is always there for me being it as a friend or lover she is there....

Preeti; smiles at him. She consoles him n sat on the nearby chair. Prem aap tum Sadhana Bhabhi ki fiqaar karna chordo unki delivery aab meri zimerdari hai {u please don't worry abt Sadhana here safety delivery is now my responsibility}. She feeds him his fav Halwa.

... she is so selfless always caring for other's never considers them as step ones. N me not able to confess my pain...

Guys that is what I imagine what could have being going on in his mind n that is what I wished to happen

Prem eats from Preetis hands as she was feeding him. He finished the food n was abt to leave again without a word but this time he took the courage n comes back to her. Just one hug he asked n she gave him a lifetime feeling of love. Her one hug her smile of his asking was giving him his life his heartbeat races he wanted to be with her only.

Preeti was happy finally he asked her something he talked to her by his own wish. She loses the hug but no Prem doesn't wanted to leave her that soon. He looked at her deep in her eyes.

Preeti please forgive me!

Prem there is nothing wrong in ur decision neither I would be happy with a relationship under these circumstances.

Prem cups her face n kisses her forehead near her hairline... maybe someday I will fill it with love...

Preetis tears were rolling by his love.., he leaves her as he couldn't see her crying even if the tears were of happiness....

The end....
Sorry for not adding the pics but I'm working with 2 advices n the pics r on the other one... I will surely add them later but please see the cover... all mentioned scenes r on it😘

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