Twitching Hearts

Intro

Hey u guys idk what's going on but my story keeps deleting. Toby, I've pretty much said wht I wanted to say. U finish. *twitches and stalks away mad.*
Toby: she's just upset. She will be ok. Anyway, please cooperate as we try to see WTF is going on. Also Ti is new at this so... no judging ok? ok. *twitches* alright then, see ya! Enjoy! *hears Tiana throw hatchet. Hears Bens voice cry out: "WTF?!?!?"* uh oh...

Toby's POV

"E-eight. N-nine. Ten! Ready or not here I come!" I yelled. I looked down at my hands. Tiny and somewhat pudgy, just like any other regular six year olds' hands. But I wasn't just any Regular six year old. I strained my ears to listen for any movement. I heard leaves crunching near by. I followed the sound but after a while all I heard was the sound of my troubled breathing. I twitched trying to hear something that would lead me to my friends finding. Yes. I twitch. I have Turrets syndrome so I twitch a lot. And i also had C.I.P.A. which meant i couldn't feel pain.But like I said, not an ordinary six year old. This time I heard leaves crunching behind me. I turned around and started to walk backwards. With every step I grew more and more frightened. All of a sudden my back touched something solid. I leaped forward, scrunched in a ball and screamed. "Ahhhh!
"Ahhhhh!"whatever it was screamed back. Wait... I'd know that voice anywhere.
"Ti?" I twitched.
"T-tobe?" It was her! I stood up from my fetal position to see her do the same. She twitched and started to laugh(she also has Tourette's syndrome.). I joined in and soon we were rolling on the ground holding our stomachs, laughing at our own scaredy-ness. We managed to pick ourselves up but only to be thrown back down by an involuntary fit of giggles. When we finally got up we herd what sounded like... chopping?We followed the noise and soon we found lumbermen swinging hatchets at trees. We just stood there fascinated, by how they hit the tree alone. How deep the gashes were...watching every forceful swing, we stood there. Mesmerized. As if we were in a trance. Through all the chopping and grunting we could hear a faint voice in the distance. "Tiana! Toby! Come on its time for dinner!" We looked at each other. We were supposed to be home by dark. But to nones surprise we weren't. We raced out of the woods from where we came looking for that familiar light blue house. My mom smiled lovingly at us as we entered.She treated Ti as if she was her daughter too, so she ate dinner at my house and spent the night. My sister always teased me about it, claiming that I was in love with her but I always denied it. A few weeks later my sister was sivearly injured. She died and for a while all i had was Dad, Mom and Tiana. My mom died and shortly after my dad committed suicide claiming that he couldn't take another loss. After a while Ti and I got separated from each other and hadn't seen her since.I was all alone...Until Slenderman found me and took me in. And from that moment on I was a creepypasta.
Please let me know if there are any mistakes so I can fix em. Thank you!!!!!