The Immune

Blood Allegiance

A/N: So I am just letting everyone know that I am starting work on Monday at my new job. I am also in school full time, so my time is valuable. I am sorry to say this, but it doesn't seem like people are really reading this story, and I am putting a lot of effort into writing and editing this. So I am going to do this chapter. But if I do not  start seeing that people are reading this, or hearing that people want me to keep writing it, then I won't be finishing. So please, if you guys want me to keep going let me know!

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Edwards POV:

I looked into the Mirror and smiled at the bloody eyes. I flinched when the person smiled back. There teeth were stained red, drops of blood falling off the teeth into his mouth. I looked around, trying to concentrate on anything but the reflection of that man in the mirror. Everywhere I looked it was the samething. It was a feeding frenzy. Bodies where on the floor, mangled and torn apart as everyone tried to get a piece of the bounty.

I looked back into the mirror only to see my own face staring at me. Or sort of. Those weren't my eyes! Those weren't my teeth!

I bared my teeth, and so did the reflection. I squinted my eyes, and so did the reflection. 

I didn't understand. I looked for Bella, but couldn't see her anywhere. I heard her tinkling laugh from across the hall. I zipped across the room as fast as I could. I went from one end to another, trying to go fast I but couldn't find her. What was happening to me? I was never this slow. I was fast, even for a vampire. But my body was sluggish, and slow. My movements became painful as I tried to force myself to go faster.

Finally, there she was. I walked, at human speed, to the throne. I knelt down on to one knee.

"My beautiful, sexy, powerful Queen. I humbly beg your grace and patience. I know that I have hurt you in the past, I beg your pardon. I beg of you, My Queen, for your love as I once had but do not deserve!"

I don't know what was going on, I couldn't control my own body, nor the words that were coming out of my mouth. It seemed like the more I tried, the more I failed.

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Bella's POV:

"Feed, my children, Feed. Take the nourishment that is ours by right! Soon, we shall show everyone that we rule, not just the night, but the entire world. Never let it be said that I do not nourish my children."

I do not know where the words came from, they just came to me. And they where the truth. I had decided to go see the Cullens, not to try and to get back my old life, but to bring the Cullens back with me.

As much as I hate my life as it stands now, I know that I cannot abandon the people that I forced to rely on me. I am the one who killed off the old regime, and forced all the men into virtual slavery. I am the one who began teaching the woman to take control. I couldn't stop now. Not until there was another who could take over for me. So for the time being I would bring the Cullens to me.

Out of the corner of the room, I saw a blur, something moving too fast for me to even see. I quickly attempted to dart after it, but as quick as I was, it was quicker. I tried to cut him off, and get ahead of him, but he was always gone before I could even think to go there. No Matter what I did, it anticipated it. I laughed, feeling a challenge for the first time in months.

I knew, instinctively that this was a male, but who could be strong enough to out pace me? I knew it could not be Edward, he was no where near strong enough. I knew the scent of everyone that owed me allegiance, but this person, was not one of mine. 

I touched the mind of every one of my subjects, telling them to form a wall. As one they moved into formation. Finally, the blur stopped and faced me.

I watched, amused, as I realized that the blur was Edward. But how could that be? Edwards was fast, very fast, but there was no way he should have been able to move faster then me. I quickly darted over to him. As I breathed in his scent, I knew something was off. I knew Edwards smell, as well as I knew my own. This was not Edward. I don't care what he looked like, this was not the love of my life. 

I took a step back, and that is when I saw it. Or should I say them. His eyes. His once beautiful, gorgeous, sexy eyes that I always loved, where now blood rubies.  They looked like those fake contacts that the Vampire wannabe's wore. 

If I was human, I would cry. As a vampire I was angry, who would dare to give him human blood without my permission or knowledge. I was too angry to think logically, too angry to be rational and poised. I moved so fast, I was flying towards Edward. I wanted to kill him, to kill this abomination that was claiming to be my darling Edward. I jumped, high into the air, my eyes raised towards whatever God was in the Heavens, Took a deep unnecessary breath, and angled my foot downward for the killing blow. During the seconds this took I forced myself to order my guards to grab him by the arms and hold him in place, just split seconds before my blow would land on his hand, taking it off.

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A/N: Like I said this will be the last update until I see....  2 more comments and 50 more votes lets say.

And I am sure that some of you don't like the ending to this story, but please have faith that all will end the way it is supposed to be.