● Author: okcacia
● Book Title: To Find Purpose
● Genre: Short Story
● Rating and Comments on Description: 8/10
The description is short, sharp and to the point about what happens in the story. One thing that could be improved is that the writer could put in a little more detail such as introducing the main character or putting in a little more descriptive vocabulary.
● Chapter 1: 7/10
In my opinion, the subject written in this short story could turn into a great longer versioned book. However the way it is presented could be improved as there is some errors with the punctuation and some confusion when it comes to past tense and present tense. Despite the fact that there are some mistakes the storyline is good and intriguing.
● Overall opinion and rating out of 10: 7/10
This story does have potential with a little bit of improvement being made to it and has an interesting plot. The fact that the writer had a limit to the word count serves them no justice. Although I'm sure if they were to turn it into an extended version where there was no restrictions this book could bloom beautifully into a great novel.
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