how i admired

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admireing those,sure to take,

the right path,

whatever lies in their wake

is quickly gone without a trace.

even in war,

those sure to take the right path,

even when the thunder shakes,

the whole world around them.

even with no stars,

and a derilict moon,

those who venture,

claim their eyes on the dark,

and find themselves back though in daylight.

or on peacful walks,

when the path ends,

they find the right track.

i lack their gift,

of knowing to take,

the right path,

to love or to hate.

i s'pose I wrote this poem, to try and show,

that im no good with words as you will know,

but to express to you my love for you,

i s'pose i was just trying to say that

i love you.

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