I just have a few questions for you guys. Feel free to respond to them or ask me some of your own! Also, you don't have to answer all. The comment section of this chapter is a platform for YOU to unleash! Let me know what I can personally do to make this story better for you. As an aspiring full time author, understanding your comfort and enjoyment is of prime importance! :)
1) I like to write chapters between 1500-2500 words. I like to make it meaty and something for you to really go through. Do you think it is too long or too short?
2) Are all of the new terms from the language Elfavryn off-putting? Or do you feel like it adds something to the story? Let me know and I'll try to accomodate it into the story!
3) Are you enjoying the story so far?
4) What do you like so far and want to see more of?
5) What do you dislike and want to see me move away from?
6) I'm open to any and all feedback. If I missed a question I should have asked, feel free to put it in a Q&A form in the comments section.
Thanks for your time!
~ Elfheim Waters
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