The Other World

my what?????

Wow, the water, the trees, so beautiful. While I was looking around and boom. It was all pitch black
When I wake up, I was tied up, and my mouth was tied. I could see a lot of people , celebrating as I was tied up. I see this ugly dude, at least for me he was . With a sword on his hand " who do he think he is , Hercules? " I thought and there was a fire. There were bringing me closer to the fire . " What are you doing, you ass hole?" No, no, noooooo." I said yelling as they bringing me closer . " Noooooo" I scream and I heard gun shot from outside and they drop me on the floor but still tied" what the heck I thought, Dana quickly untied me with a knife " what Is going on? " I ask freak out " why they want to kill me ? " I asked worried " no time for this , we're running for our lives." My friends yell

Micheal point of view

All of us were inside but Monise wasn't, I started to panicked " where's Monise? I ask worried
"She's with Dana, I think" Naisha said " and I went to Dana in the living room " where's Monise" I ask
Isn't she with Naisha "? She said
"No she's not, we find to find her " I said as I run outside looking for her while the others looking for her in the inside , they went outside" "Micheal, Micheal." I heard someone yelling my name
They went to me " she's not inside, we double check twice " Dana said guys look" I heard Naisha said
We ran to her to see what's wrong " that's her necklace, her mom give it to her." Dana said
They must of take her while she was outside , we gotta go, hurry I said while running inside
I get my sword , some food and water , "how are we going to find her?" Dana ask " I know just how? I said "but how?" Ask Naisha " we're gonna go to a house , not just a house , James house so be careful." I said .
We went , sneak inside, I went to the room while I told the girls to wait for me outside and I see James was asleep. I put the sword next to his his neck " where did they take her?" I said yelling " who dude , I didn't know your coming ." He said " you know who I'm talking about, where is she ?" Fine I'll talk,don't kill me." He said in fear
It was Mitobia men's, I saw them walking pass here and I heard someone yelling , when they pass I pretend to be asleep so I wouldn't be dead , um they went north. He said
I leet go of him and started to run outside " if you want to save her, you will have to be quicker than that." He said " what do you mean?" I ask " there's a short cut under here , take it. It will lead you right to them." He said
"Thank you" I said " really" I said looking back and the girls run up to me and went as he said
When we arrive there we heard Monise yelling. I quickly run inside and I see they were putting her close to the fire . I started shooting the men's and her friend quickly untied her as I kept shooting .

Monise point of view
"There's too much mens , we won't make it in time, we need to go." I said running with my friends holding hand
We we're surrounded" why aren't you shooting ? " I ask yelling " I'm out of bullet " he said
" Shit" Dana said
I see they grab him with us, and tied us . They put us in a cage, different cage
They were a lot them, and we were bleeding . I was weak, all of us was and boom I was black out. I wake up minutes later and see a black hair in front of me " happy birthday sweat heart " I heard someone said" mommy " I said weak as I was a little girl again. And I heard the laughter " son of a bitch" I said spitting on his face and he slapped me so hard .
Two days in a cage, no food, no water, nothing and I was starving and I know they were too. They grab me in pull me out "nooo " I yelled " let me go" I yelling and sees my friends in the other cage watching
He grab a knife, and they were bringing me closer to him , I was in front of him eyes to eyes
He was started to bring they knife closer to my neck and I heard Micheal said " noooooo, ARE YOU REALLY GOING TO KILL YOUR DAUGHTER????

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Shit guys, that end up a little bad. But I was trying to make it interesting. If you love it comment, vote , tell me what you think, I'm really trying Guys. Thank you to all the fans out there , just know that I love you all 💖💖💖💖