the puppy mill rescue (or is it?)

doggy love

(Puppies pov)
Me and my siblings wiggle around in something hard. A start crying. "help" i cry. Everything hurt. Everything burned. Everything froze. I cry again. "Help!" I say. No one comes. "HELP!" i cry. I hear something. Was it help? I couldnt see. I wanted to go to them. "Oh hello there scraps." The voice said. It was the man. I felt everything in my body start to freeze. I try to stay quite. Me and my sister had squirmed away from the area the rest of our sibling were in. The man took away our mother a few days after we were born. Im 4 days old. When a puppy yelped i new he was trying to get them. I start trying to get up. I flop over. Everything hurt like fire and ice. I get up. Flop over again. Think of your siblings. Think of life. Think of love. I get up again and try helping my sister up. I whimper very quitly and she gets up. She had been practicing when i was asleep.we start walking in some random direction. "Hey what was that?" He said. I heard a bunch of man outside. The man walks out and i hear yelling. I try going as fast as i can toward the outdoors. I had never been out there before. When i finnaly made it out i felt cool air rush onto my face. I cry as loud as i can. Not just becouse i used to hurt but becouse i felt happy and i needed them to notice me. The mans dont know were we are. The man called the area we were in the puppy shed. I had heard other puppies in there and so i had to get to the mans quick. I slowly open my eyes. Everything was blurry. But i stumbled forward still crying. The mans went quite and i cried again. They look the direction i was in. I start forward as fast as i could go. I reach a mans that strangly had more gentle hands. They pick me up and i start throwing my paw in the direction the puppy shed was in. The mans seperated into 2 diffrent dircetions. "Carl! Roberts! Come on i want to see if this puppy knows were its going. The mans werent gonna find any thing in the other direction. The man had put all the dogs and slightly older puppis under the shed. I start crying and shove my paw in the direction of the puppy shed. She starts walking forword and notices the puppy shed. I start crying even louder indicating to go inside. She does that and sees the rest of us. She yells at the other 2 mans and they go the opposite direction. "Dont worry little sweety therye going to go get help with your brothers and sisters." The woman said. "Aphrodite the puppy hero" she said petting me with 2 fingers going over my back. I like this woman. Or atleast thats what the other mans called it. 5 other mans come over with 10 little box things. There was this weird thing that looked soft. "Her name is Aphrodite" the woman said putting me down on the soft thing. "After her check up if she is in good condition can i have her back i think she knows were some stuff is." The woman said. The mans shrug ateachtoher and nod at the woman. The mans give me a bottle and put me on the weird thing which was surprisingly warm. A soft light thing was put over me and i felt snug and warm. Minutes later they take me off. Wait a minute,THE OLDER DOGGIES! I start yelping and crying and shove my paws toward the back of the dumb shed. The woman picks me up and walks to the other side. She puts me down and i sniff the dirt and start digging. I took my 30 seconds to get to the trap door. The mans had covered it with dirt to make sure know one would find it. The woman opened it and we went down the peaces of wood
Eyyyyyy so this rescue is going to be put into 2-4 parts.i will right a few more rescues when i can hoped you enjoyed and ill see yall later!