March 9th

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So I have a new story idea since I'm not really feeling it up to my story Far Away, so I'm putting that on hold for now.

The Story my sister and I are making is called Comes To You or First Glance In Forever. 

First Glance In Forever was from my friend Cheyenne, she's working with us too on this story that will be posted probably on mine or her page.

So my sister and I wrote up a plan since we were still editing a few parts on the story and everything. We may cut out some parts to it, but overall I think it will be good.

Story Line:

"I can't live like this anymore! I need to go some where else! Some where that I can live without him."

"Why must I have these thoughts about him, he's just so much better than me. It would be wrong to say how I feel about him."

Ivory Paul and Iris Paul are both twin sisters trying to solve their own problems. By problems I mean secrets, trying to keep them a secret from others. That means keeping it from their mom, friends, and brothers Logan and Jake.

Ivory Delia Paul, 17 Year Old rebellious teen. She likes nothing else more than skating, music, art, and her sweet boyfriend Liam. Well, she thought Liam was sweet, but now he's just a straight up douchebag. Last month Liam had gotten drunk without her knowing he did. When he came back home to see her, he started throwing bottles at her, hitting her, kicking, slapping and mostly yelling.

He still does that to her, even when he's not drunk. 3 weeks later, she finds out that Liam has been having sex with random girls she knows from school. Even Liam had sex with the principal's daughter! She tries to break up with Liam in the nicest way possible, but he won't let her.

"If you break up with me, you know what are the consequences."

Every since he said that to her she doesn't feel safe anymore. She can't hide from Liam, he's always watching her. She can't be that old Ivory everyone looks up to anymore, she can only be secretive and scared Ivory. She can't even tell her own twin sister, Iris.

Iris Lia Paul, a normal 17 year old teenage girl. Well, she can't be acting all normal anymore. A month ago Iris's best friend, Alex sent her a letter in her locker. This made her feel feelings for her best friend that she never felt before. They met in the beginning of Freshman year. They've been inseparable like 2 peas in a pod.

"Iris, your like that flower in a field that is unusual
and different from every other flower. Your unique. You make me laugh even when your not even trying, you make me smile when I'm feeling quite sad. That's what I like about you, even though I can't help but feel like your the one. I want you to know that I'm always there for you."

Even though her brothers, Logan and Jake tell her she can't date or let any boy date her, she still feels feelings for Alex. Even when she's not supposed to. Yes, over protective brothers. Even her brothers say that to Ivory.

The girls want to have a break from home, by a break they mean the drama there. Yet, their mother already has plans on sending them on a flight to stay with their brothers Logan and Jake in LA for 6 months. Once they get there, Ivory and Iris decide to live separately from each other. Since they want to have some time to themselves.

Ivory stays with Logan, while Iris stays with Jake. Soon days fly by as they start to realise that dealing with problems alone isn't really helping. They need help from each other. They need each other and everyone they can get to help them solve their problems.

Okay, it's probably really sucky but I tried to re-write it from paper. I change one plot of the story line since I wasn't really owning up to it. I'm going to shorten/ cut parts off of this story line when the real story comes out.

That's it for now!

•Rachelle•

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