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Hi guys. I almost the this story from last 2 months.

But got only like and votes minimum to 2 and maksimum 15 for each part.

I really wants know what changes i have do make the story more interesting than before.

For that i need ur help. Pls send your comment and ur opinion so that i can improve my writting skills.

And really wants thanks some of followers and peoples who voted for my story. U guy gave me support  and courage to continues writting .

My story : Love and war
Going to finish in next 3 part. Next story that will be based on viewer opinion. So i wants u guys to choose:

Choices:
a) neil and avni
b) sanskar and swara
c) ASR and khushi

Based on u choices i will start to post. Pls reply to this message so that i can develop my skills and story as well. Thank u.

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