Nightclan's Life (Book 1) (Re writeing)

Chapter 1 Is it the right time to start there traning?

        Flamestar's P.O.V.

   I't was dark out side while everyone is in there den's asleep.I walked out of my

   leaders den and padded away away towards Watertail's den, which is the

   Medicine cats den.

"Watertail are you asleep?" I wisperd. "No not yet anyway,I was just makeing more healing

herds if we may need any."She said. "Thats great. I need to discuss with you with something

very import." I say. "ok what is it then?" She asked.

"I was thinking that senice Moonkit and Sandkit are ready enough to become an a

apprentice yet." "Well they  are both 6 moons old and ya I think it is time to!"

Watertail said, "But who will be there mentors?" Watertail asked. "Well.....Stormtail

could be Moonkit's mentor,and Seastrip could be sandkit's mentor! What do you say?"I asked.

"That's a great idea! What day shall we do this?" "Tommorow at sunset when everyone has gotten

there freas-kill,and Moonkit shall be known as Moonpaw and sandkit should be known as sandpaw!" "Alright Watertail do not tell any cat in nightclan they will know in time ok,and

good night!" I said. "Ok I promis and good night to you toFlamestar!" She spat back.

"There's no need to be nasty Watertail." I spat back. She mumbled something so I shouldn't

hear her, so I just gigled and walked away to my leaders den. Tommorws going to be

an a very exsiting day for the two kit's. I culd up and want fast asleep in my den.

                 Frostclaw's P.O.V.

I woke up next to Moonkit and sandkit,oh they are both so cute! I thought. With Moonkit's black fur

and light blue eyes and sandkit's red fur with her green eyes! I quickly got up and walked out of the

qeen's den. "Frostclaw!" I heard someones vosic so I just kept on walk- "Frostclaw over here it's Flamestar! Please come here need to have a word with you!" Ugh what did I do this time?

Once we both got in therre I sat acrass from him. "Yes what do you need Flamestar? I was

going to get some fresh-kill for Moonkit,Sandkit, and  myself. So please make this quick!"

"Ok ok clam down-" "oh and what ever it i never DID IT!" i said. "Ok then.

I was going thinking that Sandkit and Moonkit will be an a apprentice what do you think?"

Flamestar said. "Ok when shall we do this?" "Today at sunset when everyone has gotten

there fresh-kill,and Watertail already knows about this is beacuse I talked to her about this last

night." He said.