minecraft wolf mode

about the past

Nobodys pov;
As all the wolves lay in their 'den' as they now call it, petra couldnt take it, she broke the silence,
"Hey harley?"
"Yeah?"
"Y'know when we first met you? And gill would stop blabbering about you?" Everyone turned to gill he hid his face in embarrassment,
"Heh... yeah"
"I over-heard one bit of it..."
"Mm?"
"Gill said 'when we rescued her from that trap'... were you stuck?.... in a .... trap....?" Harley remebered what happened and looked down, tears threatning to fall,
"Y-yeah....." harley sniffled as she held back the tears, jess joined in
"Do you mind telling us what happened? You dont ha-" she was cut of
"I-its ok, i will tell you...."

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harleys pov in the past;
I was thirsty, so i went to the river to get a drink, i heard rustling in the bushes so... i tried to avoid it as much as possible... i heard the *click* *click* of a gun, i slowly swiveled my head around to see what was behind me... as soon as i saw the 'human' my ears went to the back of my head... i whimpered quietly to let them know i was scared... they lowered their guns and i just heard the tall male laugh
"HAHA im not wasting this good bullet on you you mutt!" I snarled at him and snapped..
"But i will if i have to..." he said walking off, i continued to drink and when i was finished, i went to walk away from the river to get some food but then... *SNAP!!!!!* a small bear trap was caught on my back leg, i litterally howled in pain
"AAROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! AAAHAHAHAHAAH!!!!!!! MY LEG! MT LEG! MY LEG! HEEEEELP!!!!!" I cried! I screamed! But nothing, all that trying to escape really tired me out so i fell to the ground, blood still pouring out my rear leg, i just whimpered, in a sign of defeat and acceptance, i knew i was dead... untill...
"GUYS IT CAME FROM THIS WAY!!" I heard a female voice say
"OK LETS GO SHE SOUNDS LIKE SHES IN TROUBLE!" I heard a deep voiced male say....
"HERE SHE I- OOOOOOOH MY GOOOOD !!!!!" The female wolf was about to finish her setence when she saw the wound on my leg, i shakily lifted my head up and turned it towards them, i saw a creamy coloured female wolf with pale blue eyes, a large white male with black speckles on his nose, and a fairly attractive slightly smaller black male with a white patch of fur on his chin
"Hey hey hey...... shhh...sh... sh.... sh... sh... its ok, we're here to help..." the black male wolf said, both of the males wedged their jaws into the snare and pulled it open just enough for me to slip free, i tried to stand on it but it was no use.... i fell, and then... i saw...black.... only black... so much darkness...
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"Look! Shes ok!" I heard that same fenale vouce say,
"Hey easy now..." the white male ordered... but in a nice way.
"H-hey.... whats your name..?" I slowly sat up looking at all three of them, taking a deep breathe..
"I-i-im harley.........." to my suprise they all smiled and their tails started wagging
"Im aiden,-" the white wolf said gesturing to himself
"This is maya-" he gestured to the small female cream wolf...
"And this is gill..." i smiled, and they slowly lead me back to their den, i followed, limping with each step but i had friends to support me... good friends

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Nobodys pov;
"Woow......" is all petra could manage to say...
"Lucky they came along aye" lukas said nudging harley...
"Heh.... yeah...but, im pretty beat... im gonna sleep ok?" I said yawning and laying my head on my front paws
"Us too! Goodnight!" They said in unison
"Night..." i said back sleepily.

Should I keep this book going or nah?