Hey, it's me, Lizzy, again! I just wanted to ask what do you guys think about the last part? do you guys like that kind of writing? or do you think its confusing? or are you just like "Liz I don't care what the hell your writing style is just as long as I see some sexy smutty action!" okay enough of rambling onto the story!
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OH! and a little something I'm also adding is () for like when someone is thinking and stuff.. Yeah? Yeah okay lets go with that!
(good job liz you've managed to make it even more confusing for people to read your gay ass book..fuck)
Little refresher on how to read it..
Mark= the italicized text
Sean= the normal text
()= people talking to their self
Underlined= gestures/motions (example: Mark slowly unbuttons Sean's shirt)
Okay now here's the story. (nailed it liz, they will definitely understand whatever the hell you just said)
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Sean's POV
I feel like I'm going crazy! Mark sucking on my neck and rubbing my bulge. God I don't think I can take much more before I lose it completely.
-Fuck mark! just fuck me already! please!
-Mmmm someone's eager? shall we take this upstairs?
-No that's to far always lets just do It here
(what am I thinking..I am going to have such a mess to clean up after this.. shit)
-yeah lets just do it down here
-are you sure? you're not worried about people seeing us?
Mark says, gesturing to the window
-the only thing I'm worried about is that you're not fucking me on the coffee table yet.
-shit okay!
Mark quickly gets his shirt off, and nearly rips Sean's trying to get his off
-mark..i love you
Mark stops what he is doing and looks down at the floor
-Mark are you okay? did I do something wrong?
Mark doesn't answer
-Mark?
Sean lightly taps his shoulder
-Babe..
-SHIT! YOU'RE BLEEDING!
Mark's nose is bleeding..badly
sorry kittin but today just isn't your day..
heheheh sorry for the hella short part but I promised a part like..*checks phone for the date* two days ago and I felt really bad that I didn't post one so.. here's all I got. but I think you guys will love the little cliff hanger I got goin on. but anyways! I should be able to get another part buy this Friday so be on the look out for that!
love you guys!
-liz
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It Must Be True Love
General Fiction-Septiplier fluff/sex- Literally only made for shits and giggles, I love Mark and Jack but I'm not one of those people that is trying to force the relationship. I think it's fun to write stories, but let's keep them stories. -liz
