Hay guys, I know I havent posted in a while, been very busy with all the school work, but mostly all of my assesment is finshed and were going into week 9 so its nearly holidays, yay! This poem is again about my little baby cousin Harley (I posted a poem of him, its the firstpoem i put on this book), It is his birthday tomorrow and he's turning the big ole 1!! yay!!!! so im going to give him this poem tomorrow, if you have any ideas or suggestions as to what I can add or to make it better please say in the comments, it would be great if there was a way i could improve this poem for him. P.s you guys are the first people to hear this, so I need your honest opinion on it please
:D Enjoy!!
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Finally your one,
oh how you've grown,
from the tiny little hands,
to the not so tiny toes.
It seems like yesterday,
when you were brand new,
look at all the things,
you can now do.
You can sit and stand,
walk and crawl,
but you are still,
so very small.
Your once bald head,
has now some brown,
And in your once empty mouth,
a small tooth has sprout.
Still a baby,
a precious little treasure,
cute and snuggly,
but a bit of a terror.
So enjoy your birthday,
you little cutie,
have lots of fun,
my little Harley.