Help! Plot summary crisis!

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Okay, so recently I have realized that many people don't even take the time to read this book, because the book description SUCKS. So recently I have made a couple of possible descriptions. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE give me feedback. I need to know which one to use to attract more readers. (The third one is the one I have right now just in case it's all in my mind and the summary doesn't SUCK.) Please comment/ message back which one you think I should use. Feed back is GREATLY APPRECIATED!!

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#1. My name is Cecilia Emerson, and my story isn't a pretty one. My life took a bad turn when my mother died. Ever since then, I've put everything into my training. I want to be a demon hunter, a warrior of light. I want to avenge my mother so I can finally crawl out of this pit of darkness surrounding me. There is only one thing standing in my way: my soul mate. He is supposed to be my other half, yet he is the opposite of everything I stand for. He is a demon, a prince. But he might just be the thing I need. He is my salvation, but I can't be with him. I have to choose: the path of vengeance or the prince of hell.

My name is Jace Edwards, and I'm chasing true love. All my life I have been told of my destined Queen. How we will one day rule our kingdom and love and cherish each other forever. The one thing I wasn't told about is that she would be a hunter of my kind. Granted, she is only after the rogue ones outside the kingdom, but it still pains me that my mere existence goes against all her ethics and morals. I will do whatever it takes to win over my Queen. She will embrace my darkness. She will be mine.

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#2. There are things in our world; things that you turn away from because you don't want to believe them. Well they're real, and if I don't stop them...they're coming for you next. Ever since the death of my mother I have been hunting these creatures, the demons. They pray on your worst nightmares, and then drag you down into the depths of hell to steal your soul. We'll...at least the bad ones do. All the honorable demons, the ones who go through with god's wishes to punish only the evil, live in a kingdom in the realm of Hell. They are ruled over by the royal family. Here's the catch: A king and a queen are needed to keep the balance, or the dimension will crumble. And that's where I come in.

Jace Edwards has finally put his claim on Cecilia Emerson. She is his other half; his destined partner to rule over their kingdom. The only problem is she's a demon hunter and he's a demon. Will he be able to convince her that their love is worth it? Or will Cece remain on the path of vengeance instead? She will just have to learn that there is no fighting against fate.

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#3. Two years ago, Cece's mother died. She should have just mourned her and moved on like a normal person--But she's not a normal person. Cece is part of a secret race known as Warriors of Light or demon hunters. Devastated by the loss of her mother, she enrolls in an elite training facility open to all races--including demons. Just not the bad ones that killed her mother. Her vendetta will be put to the test when she learns that the worst demon of them all, the immortal Prince Jace Edwards of the royal family of Hell, is her soul mate. New days bring new discoveries and her mother's killer may be closer to her then she thought. She can try to fight it, but it's impossible to fight against Destiny. And Princes of Hell never let go of what's theirs.

**Don't forget to comment back which one is your favorite!!

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